This is a super cute fanfic.. I'm a little sad that it was rushed and just one chapter. I want more lol

I love it

LOVE IT!

wonderful oneshot love it alot - suckerforthepretty

This is really great! I had questioned how you were going to get everything into a one-shot, but this worked out well!

SOOOOO KAWAIII! Great plot, awsome sex, pedofilic snake bastard gets killed(though I wish Kabuto and Sasuke did to, oh well your story not mine), GaaNaru is sanctioned, and Sarutobi lives! Bravo! Please make a sequeal!

This was absolutely adorable and I love this story very much! Best one chapter story I have ever read!

Freaking amazing. Just ... Whoa. I've read this like four times and I still cannot get over how awesome it is. Although I do wish it was longer. Oh well. It was still epic.

Oh, my god! This was so BEAUTIFUL! And so amazingly well done all around!

I love you work so much that i end up reading it whenever i find myself hating humanity...you are very articulate and your imagination is a breath of fresh air...also...thank you for showing Naruto as a smart one. It is a welcome change...please keep writing. You are very good :3

I LOVED IT :) I'm just a bit sad it wasn't longer . . . . . but still Good luck and stay awesome :)

this story was pretty good, i wished it could have been more detailed, but still, it was awsome XD

This fiction is something.

There's this mistake: "an tantalizing" is supposed to be "a tantilizing". And something along the lines of where Gaara and Naruto started to acknowledge some of the 'heat' was a quiet mistake but I noticed it and it was quite confusing at first;. now, I cannot locate it while skimming. The style of writing used was good and smoothly flowing but the punctuation must be exercised more thoroughly though to further clear the paragraphs and sentences. Punctuation also helps define and weigh impact.

The summary for this fiction was apt and, might I say that this does not happen often. The theme of loneliness and bonding is there. But, the way you described the universe Gaara and Naruto were in is slightly unsettling because of all the hardships Naruto had to foresee and have gone through-and the entailing revenge missions which had been schemed, thus making the behaviour uncanny for the usually bright blob of sunshine-and the importance of Gaara's siblings in the end being not clarified. If I take into consideration that you (the author) wrote the universe in your own hands then the following may be passed: Naruto's uncanny abilities and foresight and the unmentioned and vague beatings along with the revenge missions from the blonde. But, you (the author) should have defined Temari and Kankurou's concern for their brother and his happiness otherwise the ending can be expressed as an implied truth for all siblings except that the sibling intended is a Jinchuuriki amd a feared genocide-murderer treated like the Devil himself.

This is good smut and good one-shot. Keep it up!

More power!

This is by far one of the BEST Gaara/Naru fics I've ever read. From when the first meet, to when they get to the smexing. I also love how their demons "introdice" them. Another amazing fic. Keep up the great work!

awesome fic. to bad its only a 1shot. it would have made a kick ass multi-chapter. o well _ Ja.