J'aime bien ton histoire elle est bien écrite .

Par contre pour ton explication un petit bof.

Lame

Alors il lit icha icha ok pourquoi pas.

Je trouve bizarre qu'il y est déjà des fans du naruhina alors que le manga a 6 au moment de l'écrit, disons que par an i tomes cela revient a 30 tomes et il me semble que c'est vers la fin qu'il y a le couple.
Bien que 30 est max plutôt 18 .
Mais cela veut dire que déjà les gens voulait voir le couple.

Ici déjà il y a tsunami qu'il y a eu as broque chose Sakura .
Je dirais anko kurenai et Hana .

At this point you definitely needed to look up how to break up sentences. Almost all of them in this are way too long. Otherwise the concepts interesting.

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Cool:). Update soon!

If you ever decide to redo or alter this fanfiction you could use haku's active genes activating naruto's dormant genes in a domino effect as an excuse for naruto suddenly gaining haku's bloodline

This is a very interesting story. I thinks it' great and will certainly keep reading. The only problem I have with it is the punctuation. It is mostly fine, but you desperately need more commas. I was constantly getting lost, though I would quickly fix it in my head. If you aren't sure where to put them then please get a beta or something.
Thanks.

shame this has not been updated in a long time, although I cant agree with naruto getting the curse seal, I do find the way you explained it reasonable, although I still find a small issue with it in naruto's seal itself.

One of the goals of the curse seal is to weaken the will of its user, while the fourths seal relies on this willpower as part of the cage that is keeping kyuubi tied down.
Knowing this, I would have expected the fourth to build in protections to ensure that naruto's willpower cannot be tampered with by outside means, as I honestly cant imagine a fuuinjutsu prodigy like the fourth to miss such a thing, especially not when its his own son that he is using the seal on.

To yet another weird Hinata-hater:
615 and going on.
(Wrote this before 616 - could be even more extraordinary - or not. Still, 615 is enough already.)

brilliant! can't wait for more!

Update this please

I hope you can get sasuke under control; I really hate that he looses himself so easily and I think if you were to point out how pathetic it is that the seal co trols him it would make him fight harder

This is a really interesting story, and I hope you update it! Favorite quotes:

"Thanks TenTen well gotta go I was supposed to meet my team… " Naruto glanced up at the clock on the wall above her.

"…A half hour ago, so I hope to see you at the exams."

...

Coming out onto the area that led to the stairs for up to the 3rd floor they were treated to a sight that Naruto immediately wanted to forget.

TenTen's teammate Lee was crouched down crying being hugged to the background of the setting sun, by almost identical but larger version of him but with a jonnin flak jacket, Naruto realized who it was from what both Kakashi and TenTen had said this must be Maito Gai the Taijutsu master.

Off to one side was a bright red turtle with a Konoha forehead protector around its neck while to the other side looking freaked out were Sasuke and Sakura, the former looking slightly annoyed and a bit worse for wear.

"Lee, you know that move is forbidden for a reason, for your punishment you must run a hundred laps of the training ground."

Instead of looking dismayed Lee actually looked overjoyed about this.

"Yes Gai-sensei and if I cannot manage that, I will do one thousand punches at the log."

Now Gai was grinning as well and Naruto was getting seriously freaked out while TenTen had hid herself behind him trying to avoid being noticed by her less than sane teammates.

"Bravo my student and if you can't manage that I will do one thousand push ups with two boulders and a young maiden strapped to my back."

"And if Gai-sensei fail's at that I will walk around the village on my hands singing the national anthem."

Naruto turned to look at TenTen a ton of questions swirling around his mind, but in his confusion he only managed to get out.

"Do we even have a national anthem?"

...

"Oh how about we make a little bet then? If Naruto finishes higher than all of your students then I win if not you win."

Asuma laughed again thinking he had this in the bag.

"Fine then the winner gets to go on a date with Kurenai here."

Kurenai bristled at this, she wasn't some possession to be thrown around and she knew her students could outperform there's she had trained them hard for this exam after all so she cut over there conversation before they could go on.

"What about my team?"

Asuma and Kakashi both looked at her, before Kakashi nodded, eye smiling at her and spoke.

"Ok if one of your team comes higher than him or all the members of Asuma's team what do you want?"

She grinned evilly at them both.

"You have to burn all your Icha Icha..." She turned on Asuma grinning she had the prefect revenge already for him.

"…And you have to go on a date with Anko-chan."

She should have been more suspicious when Kakashi didn't even flinch, but Asuma paled wonderfully so that was all that mattered.

"Deal." Kakashi agreed to her terms instantly.

"Deal." Asuma sighed afterwards seeing the looks on both of his fellow jonnins faces; he grimaced remembering who much Anko disliked him, for trying to get with Kurenai and for calling her some less than pleasant names that one time.

...

When the other teams and the remainder of Naruto's arrived they were surprised and the females angered, to see a happily chatting away Naruto and the crazy proctor from the day before sitting up on the station they had been told to gather at, munching away on dango.

Until she was sure all the contestants had arrived Anko was quite happy to ignore them and continue having her little chat with Naruto, it wasn't often she got to talk to new people after all what with nearly everyone in the village being scared she would experiment on them or some shit.

"You best go join your team now Naru-chan, make sure to kill someone for me kay..."

Naruto frowned at the strange nickname she had suddenly decided on, or maybe that she wanted him to kill someone, before nodding and dropped down to greet his team, as he was moving off he heard her say in a much quieter more seductive tone.

"...Oh by the way I'm gonna use you to freak the rest out try not to worry it'll be fun."

Before he even got a chance to work out what she meant though, he heard a quiet thud, as Anko landed on the ground a short way behind him, then as he was saying a quick hello to Sakura and Sasuke, he heard her start to speak shouting so that all the assembled teams could hear her.

"Alright kiddies listen up, what you can see behind me is Area 44 or the forest of death so well done for getting here." Anko finished in a mocking tone indicating that if you thought you did well or struggled to find your way here you were clearly screwed.

"Naru-chan, are you listening to me?" She barked suddenly at Naruto who still had his back turned to her and had been listening to something Sakura had said to him.

As he turned to speak the next thing Naruto knew a kunai had skimmed his cheek leaving a shallow two inch long cut that started to ooze blood.

'This must be the freaking people out part she was on about, may as well let her have her fun no need to show any of my skills off considering I'm in front of all of these potential enemies.' He thought as he watched Anko move to behind him with an impressive burst of speed then felt her drape herself over his back wrapping her arms around him her chin being placed on his shoulder.

"Are you enjoying this Naru-chan?" She whispered huskily in his ear as she nuzzled the blood off his cheek with her lips.

Anko gave herself a mental pat on the back as she felt the increasing levels of killing intent coming in from most of the surrounding female Gennin and one Rock Lee.

"I think the question is…" Naruto said before twisting his head back around to face her giving her lips a quick peck, grimacing a bit as he could taste his own blood on them.

"...Are you Anko-san?"

Anko grinned at his boldness he was good fun, she would have to tell Kurenai all about this later, before going to reply.

"Very daring."

...

"Yo boss lady how's he doing?" A copy of her she had made a while prior, spoke up as it came into the clearing carrying the remains of Naruto's broken Zanbuto it was sent to fetch.

Anko glared up at her doppelganger in slight annoyance as it placed the bits of the sword down in a pile a few meters away.

"Don't be like that I just wanna know how he's doing." The copy tried again, flashing her cheeky grin.

"No just no… I'm not going to start talking to a copy of myself, no way am I that crazy yet." She murmured, before dispelling the shadow clone, nodding her head in confirmation of the fact that all the bits of the weapon had been collected, after she'd absorbed the clone's memories.

'What kind of idiot talks to their own clones anyway?...' She questioned herself as she carefully checked on the bandages that covered Naruto's stomach wound, satisfied that it seemed to be healing at an accelerated rate something which she assumed was to do with the Kyuubi sealed within him.

'…I mean I know I'm meant to be crazy but I'm also meant to be some kind of whore, that would be too much…' Her thoughts continued as she carefully took in Naruto's uncovered upper body, for purely medical reasons of course.

'…Then again… I could use a partner to tease men with when Kur-chan's being her boring old self…' She mused tapping a finger to her chin in thought as she did the idea was growing on her.

'...Maybe even a clone Henged to look like Kur-chan?' She mused with a evil chuckle that would of done Orochimaru proud as she thought of all the things she could make her friend do.