Lovely. And sad. And hopeful too. They're both so broken. You caught that really well.

this is good, really good, so bittersweet and i love it so much

Love it. Vader is such a mess.

Wow, why, no, just kill me now, this his enough.

(I loved that book. It's so incredibly quotable. And wonderful. And them - just... THEM. I cannot deal. And this book - it's the worst. I felt sad about them BEFORE reading it, after I've become pretty... attached to their little tragedy).

nice.

How heartbreaking. :(

wow. this is...this is good. i didn't expect this to be THIS good. CHRIST i love Star Wars. and you did this very excellently. i can't even... begin to describe... um, just wow. i never liked Anakin after he got older, and especially after he went Dark Side (wow, it's funny using that phrasing while actually talking about Star Wars, ha!), but I've always loved Obi-Wan, and this actually made me feel a little bad for little Vader. and christ this is just, everyone is so perfectly in character, i love it. now i feel like seeing the one where Anakin first begins his training. i think it's my favorite. keep writing, this stuff is GOLD!

oh, i like this very much. especially obi-wan's parting line.

A great story. Very good.

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...Wow. I love Obi Wan's and Anakins relationship (as brothers), and... Wow. Poor Obi. Poor Ani.

Amaking story. I feel weird inside now. You should be pleased. That's a compliment.

Eve

That was beautifully done. :)

Hey, really good job! I thoroughly enjoyed the interaction between Vader and Obi-Wan, and the ending was lovely!

gOOD.

Great story, well written! I loved it!

Very good. You've got some very interesting concepts here, and although the beginning was a bit slow I was drawn in by such thoughts as "He’s had kinder enemies." and the couple paragraphs leading up to "“We both know I made a very poor Jedi, from more than one point of view.”" Nice fic, well and smoothly written.