Okay... This is getting confusing...

this is great! I love reading it from Rose's point of view. You've written her character really well.

I understand completely what you mean about Twilight. I couldn't stop reading until i'd finished Eclipse, and i read Breaking Dawn as soon as it came out. I'm looking forward to that Twilight fic!

I think I prefer ths ending to the one we got in 'Journey's End' because it gives more of a sense of closure then that episode did.

I think from Rose's Pov this is exactly what she needed to be able to try and move on.

Awe, it's so sad. [ But in all honesty I think she can do it. I think she can live with this Doctor. I think once she gets past the pain of losing hers, she's be able to love this doctor too and be happy with him. That's just my opinion. Heck if I had anything remotely similar to the Doctor (mainly Tennant!) I'd be a happy camper. lol. Anyways, it was a beautiful ending to a great story. Can't wait to read the sequel!

brilliant ending. loved the fact Donna got a lookin

can't wait for the next update ;D

hmm...interesting thoughts on the whole 'I love you too' thing. I never thought of it like that. woo...something to ponder. lol. anyways, great chapter. Gah, I cried when I saw that episode. It was so sad. *tear* the poor doctor. poor Rose.

brilliant chapter loved the little bits with Pete in, it made it so much more different. i hope the final chapter isn't angsty, i'm getting sick of all the angst on how the Human Doctor isn't the right Doctor. it's annoying! update soon

loved the last line, brilliant chapter update soon

Welcome to the dark side! lol. Glad to see you've joined the ranks of the Twilighters. lol. Anyways, great chapter! I watched the final episodes and was TOTALLY blown away by what had happened! It was insane! I totally loved it, until I saw what happened with Rose and all. And then the poor doctor! So sad! [ I totally think you should upload the twilight fic. I think it'd be great! So who's your fav character and why?

For me it's Edward and Alice. I have a lot in common with Edward as far as personality, but Alice is simply AWESOME!

liked how you slipped pete in. i take it you're ending this in an AU (where Rose and the Doctor stay together) or at least adding a few more scenes. update soon

Of course I want to know what happens when or if he loses it.

Loved Rose's musings during this it felt as if I don't know she was sort of detached from everything.

i would like the next few chapters to be long and a bit less script like...update soon

Good stuff, slight mistake though

"They’ve got us! Power’s gone. Some kind of Krone-on loop."

should be - chrono loop.

:)

hmm...a bit rocky but good. looking forwards to the next chapter