Reviews for As The Snow Falls
emeraldarrows chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
Fascinating and deeply poignant. Very well done.
Anais in the afternoon chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
That was quite the twist. It made it that much more poignant, because it allowed you to think of the person to think of a person first, before realizing who/what he was.
Tathrin chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
That was pure beauty!

And the ending was absolutely incredible! I am so in love with this story I can't even begin to say how much. That was brilliant.
Seven chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
This was a really good story - I started to think it might have been Michael - but never suspected it to be Todd. That was one twist I didn't see coming. I figured that he must have been a wraith treated with the retrovirus - but Todd - well that was different. Thanks for writing.
ajannon chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
I read this a while back... I loved it then, and I still love it now. You're my hero. :-D
ShadeyCharacter chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
*stares* Wow. It was Todd all along huh? I love how you did that! ...from what I'm getting he got a dose of the retrovirus right? That would explain why the people didn't immediately try to kill him and 'partially' why he couldn't remember anything much about his past.

Sometimes the Atlantis team can make me so mad! After all...if they hadn't been so cruel and unfair to Michael then he wouldn't have gone all "lets kill everyone." ...at least that's what I think. *nods*

Anyway. You did an EXCELLENT job with this!
wraithlover chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Is he Todd or John? The end i think ii he was Todd.
Port-of-Seas chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
Excellent story. It's really one of the best SGA AU's I've ever read. I have some trouble understanding how he wasn't immediately killed for being a wraith, or how he could survive so long on human food so long, but I'm just gonna guess he got a strong dose of retrovirus.

Really beautiful story. It could easily survive outside of the fanfic universe.
Space1Traveler chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Gotta tell ya. If I had known this was about Todd, I never would have read it. I like Todd, but...

I thought it was Ronon, and I cried for him and wanted John to find him...

Then SHOCK! This was well written and you kept the mystery until the end. Good job, good story, and good LOTR!

Well done.
Lee Pyro chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
Oh...my...word. That was beautiful but so sad. All through I kept thinking: Who is this guy? It can't be Shep, can it? I like the thought of Todd mistakenly thinking that he was Sheppard. The two are a lot alike in many ways.

Then there was that part of the end almost made me cry. ( I find it hard to accept that our team would do something like that, even though it's been show that the can and do. Todd is one of my favorite characters and I love how you've written both him and this story. Fully captivating. Thanks for posting. Keep writing.
Amaruk Wolfheart of the Wraith chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Yes. I love it, I love you, and I love Todd. I swear, I sat there for a good two, three minutes with tears dripping down my cheeks onto the Todd Plushie I was hugging so hard the stuffing almost burts his seams. _;;

Steve Plush Doll: *rolls eyes*

Again, thanks much for asking me to beta this brilliant piece. (As a bonus, it gave me a while to calm down before reviewing, so this will actually be an intelliigent response. ...Ish.)

Michael Plush Doll: *also rolls eyes*

Okay. So this was just brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. Major kudos to you, even though - because? - it's such a bittersweet story. I think you've done a amazing job with the characters in this little AU you've created (though I readily admit I don't like the idea of the Atlantis team doing anything like this, even if we've already seen how ruthless they can be).

Steve & Michael Plushies: *exchange 'duh!' looks*

Rui's amazing. Todd's freaking awesome. You're freaking awesome squared. Easily one of my very favorite Wraith fics ever, despite the depressingness (which I'm sure isn't a word). I can't tell you enough how much I enjoyed reading it, and I'm sure I'll be rereading it multiple times in the future. There are many stories I follow, many stories I love, but only a few which I have reread, and only a very few which I have reread more than once. I think this is destined to be one of those very few.

Todd Plush Doll: ... ... ... *smile*
Annie866 chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Oh my. I kinda thought there was a twist to the identity too. I found your story quite riveting and well written. The slow healing, wariness, the woman's tenderness and the gradual building of trust - it all rang true.
spookysister7 chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
OMG! I love it! You made me think that was Shep all along. It made me cry at the end. So I assume they did a Michal thing to poor Todd?
Shanthaia chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Oh, this story is so sad it made my cry. Well written but confusing until the last paragraph tells what really happend. I had a suspision it was him but then as the story carried on I thought - no that can't be. Really horribly sad but also a beautiful story...horribly beautiful :(