Now you know why I enjoy having Machetti annoy Vickie so much. It's fun isn't it? Nice match with Kane, this was a good chapter that showed a lot of backstage progression with Jarrod's character. Nice Job.

Peace!

GREAT MATCH! I haven't done a Last Man Standing match yet, but after seeing yours, I'm tempted. You did a great job and had a bunch of sick spots in there.

I've got no problem putting Machetti and Madrox in a match. Just let me know when you want to do it. We'll have to put it in your story, but I'm willing to help you write it like I did with NarutoFreak in his story 'Layin' the Smackdown!'

Also I'll see what I can do about promoting your story. When I post my version of the draft I'll put something in the author's note in the end. You've got a great story here and I'm sure once people find it they'll enjoy it as much as I do. Just promise not to abandon your story, no matter how busy things get. Otherwise we'll never be able to do that Machetti/Madrox match.

Peace!

Yay an update! I was wondering what happened with this story. Out of curiosity who is Jarrod's father? Or is that going to be a surprise? That dropkick of yours was kick ass. I'm expecting a lo of innovative stuff at the Judgment Day match.

Peace!

Hi, I read your story and I have to say tha I liked it right aren't that many original wrestler fics out there and I was glad to find your fic...I think your wretler has a cool personality. It's nice that you talk about the main concerns of profesionnal wretlers such as injuries !

Looking foward to your next chapter !

I like it. And at least it was only a fractured rib, it could have been much worse. I watched some of those SuicidalDragon videos on YouTube, and I'll admit, they're pretty sick. Unlike WWE the wrestlers in Japan can do more innovative moves which makes things a lot more interesting, but at the same time, a lot more dangerous. If someone botches one of those moves you'll be LUCKY if you only end up with a fractured rib. Keep up the good work!

Peace!

Good chapter. That last segment sounded like something from Superbad. I was expecting someone to shout 'McLovin' or at least for Elijah to apologize and say "Sorry I blocked your c*ck."

All movie related stuff aside, my favorite spot in the handicap match was Madrox's leg drop of Benjamin when he was in 619 position. I've been planning on doing a move like that with Machetti for a while, but instead of a leg drop I thought of a seated senton type of thing.

Also, good point about the 'entertaining' part. You're right, it doesn't have to be realistic, that's why its fanfiction. My story 'kind of' differs because I'm trying to make it as realistic as possible with Machetti going through WWE programming.

But keep up the good work.

Peace!

Good start. Keep this story going it has a lot of potential. Madrox sounds like a very entertaining wrestler and you gave him a cool personality for backstage.

I'll offer you a little bit of advice: Don't push Madrox too far too fast. I know I might sound a little hypocritical after what I did with my story. But if you make your wrestler rise through the ranks too quickly it makes it a little less believable.

Keep doing what you've been doing and don't get discouraged if the reviews don't pour in immediately. Just keep chugging along and eventually people will notice your story and will be anxiously awaiting every chapter.

So yeah, I've said my piece. Keep up to good work, I'll be reading.

Peace!

So I clicked on this purely by accident. Although I have to say I'm pretty damn glad I did. I like the idea of a GUY OC fic, and the fact that you write pretty damn good is definitely a plus. Keep up the great work, cause I'll definitely be reading more as you update. So do that soon aight?