pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase where are you am reading the story for tht nth time

where are you since 4 years? you promised that it won't take long!please come back T_T

UPDATE! please!

My apologies for the late review... things have been, hectic to say the least.

This chapter was very well written and I enjoyed the conflict of emotion Heero is going through. My heart just about shattered when he said aloud, "Just go away!" and Relena nodded and did so. I feel for the girl, what can I say.

Very interesting with his counter part or subconscious or whatever it is. A nice role here, the voice of reason to him it would seem, or at least the attempt to do so.

Keep up the great work and thanks so much for all the effort you put into this story. I'll be looking forward to the next update.

I really liked it... I read all of it before I reviewed... you are doing a great job by the way... I really do like where this story is going... and I can't wait for Chapter 7!

I read this entire story in one swoop...Currently, it's now 5AM in the morning and I want MOAR, as they say. I like this. Very emotional. I haven't seen a whole lot of fanfictions like this one. Yours deals with a whole lot more than what fanfictions usually do. I've never seen anything dealing with the "limbo" chapter. It confuses me, but I'm sure I'll be able to see the entire picture soon enough. I think I'm starting to, and since I am, I just have to say that you are an evil genius that must not be stopped! This is very angsty and I liked it. And your intimate scene with Heero and Relena was very good! All of it is, actually...Though you do have mistakes in it. Some grammar and spelling. But it's nothing too major. But you'll switch from a present to past speaking. Like "this is" and "it was" and such. You need to work on that. Usually, stories are told in past tense and that's what you usually do too. Just make sure you look out for it. Sorry if that seems a little picky, but when I write, I want to know about my writing style too, not just that my story is "cute" and that I should "update soon!" and such. So good job. And I really do hope you update soon!

O.O i love it! poor Heero and Relena...please update soon!

Why is the whole chapter underlined?

But good action, even though it's a short chapter. Silly Heero, pushing Relena away like that. You've got me curious about the bad guy.

Hooray! I'm so glad you updated and I really enjoyed this chapter. It drove me a little crazy that everything was underlined, but everything is so consistent and well thought-out that you just gotta love it.

KEEP IT UP!

Ahh, Update Update! Soon!

Aww! Stupid Heero! When will he learn not to push her away? When, dammit? Oi. But so glad you updated! Yay! Nice fight sequence. But just one question; why is it all underlined? Hee! I think something went wonky with when you went to upload this. You might want to try to fix it. It's ok, it happens all the time. But all the text is ... mysteriously underlined.

Anyways, I'm still waiting for stupid Heero to realize who the "illusion" is and that she's NOT AN ILLUSION! But what does she mean, "We're running out of time"? That does not sound kosher! Not at all! Not cool! Heero can't run out of time. He's Heero! He's amazing! He's stupid. But he's amazing!

Oh well. Next time, definitely don't take so long.

TTFN

GR! YOU'RE SO CRUEL! *sniff* That was way to short of a chapter. Even if it was 2 parts. Please update soon with a longer chapter...PLEASE! I'm begging here! *sniff*

really good so glad you updated again. I love this story. poor Relena and poor Heero will he ever understand please update again soon

Try to make your tenses consistent, since it keeps switching back and forth from past to present; also, the "it's" at the beginning should not have an apostrophe (it only uses one when it's the contraction for "it is," not for indicating possession). Other than that, nice work; it's cool to see how Relena handles pre-speech stress. Good luck in all your endeavors!

KYAH! SHE LIVES! HURRAH!lol. PLease update soon! I love it!