| Reviews for The One in the Shadows |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 4/9 He kinda seems like a bitch, he’s a slytherian cunning and ambition are supposed to come naturally to him bitching about being in his brothers shadow and nobody liking him aren’t his natural traits if anything these would only fuel his desire to be better. |
 2678024 chapter 38 . 3/31 made it to chapter 38... writing was better than average... story telling was more engaging at the beginning where there was character development.. chapters 30 on lacked coherence. I can see hints of foreshadowing and plot-but nothing which actually drives the story forward. ...keep on keeping on ...this was an ameable effort |
| what am i doing chapter 12 . 12/19/2018 this is good |
| Shivam591 chapter 19 . 12/16/2018 What the hell is even going on |
| lovefanfictions72 chapter 24 . 11/3/2018 Really dont like how everyone feels that he should be the one to rectify this situation... stupid |
| TiffTang chapter 47 . 5/16/2018 All chapters are amazing Are there more It is veryyyyyyyyyyy thrilling |
| Foy the Snooze Button chapter 6 . 3/11/2018 Out rightly flirting with a girl you half know, Harry you dog you ;) |
| thirteenth soul chapter 47 . 9/25/2017 U abandoned it didn't u... O well |
| BROCKLESNER chapter 19 . 7/7/2017 GOOD! |
| BROCKLESNER chapter 18 . 7/7/2017 I Liked Chapter Eighteen The Other Brother! |
| BROCKLESNER chapter 17 . 7/7/2017 The Chapter Did Not Seem Too Rushed. I Liked The Flashback. |
| BROCKLESNER chapter 16 . 7/7/2017 GOOD CHAP! |
| BROCKLESNER chapter 15 . 7/7/2017 I Want Harry Potter To Become An Animagus! |
| BROCKLESNER chapter 14 . 7/7/2017 I Prefer Halo Reach Over Halo 3. |
| BROCKLESNER chapter 13 . 7/7/2017 I Like The Chapter. It Was A Very Good Chapter. |
