Reviews for Trying
Solvent Harp37 chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
I love this story! It's so difficult to find seme Ichigo, especially with Byakuya. I like the idea of Byakuya loving Ichigo first, and Ichigo trying to forget about his love for Rukia and love him back. Personally, I strongly dislike IchiRuki so I'm rooting for Byakuya. Anyways, keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for your next update.
AQMiren chapter 2 . 5/12/2012
I like the start to this story but i was wondering if you are going to continue it. I really think something could be made of this.
Crazyjess09 chapter 2 . 12/2/2010
i hope that there is more to this and that i hope that at some point you can continue this beause i would really like to see where these 2 go
zauberermatar chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
it's quite nice.
Cuz.Neji is the UltimateXD chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
No! You can't just leave it there! I do hope that you update soon as I wanna know is poor Byakuya get's a happy ending with Ichigo. Why would he leave him?XD

In short: Update soon!
milkchocolatehot64 chapter 2 . 4/18/2009
HU! (that's a gasp) WHY NOT! HE'S WORRIED ABOUT ICHIGO LEAVING YET HE WON'T STAY WITH HIM! THAT MAKES NO FUCKING SENSE! PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CH SOON! CAN'T WAIT!
99997777733 chapter 2 . 3/12/2009
Great fic, keep up the great work
Shadow2485 chapter 2 . 12/7/2008
Awesome start update soon
minoki chapter 2 . 12/4/2008
aw cute, i like how complicated the relationship is. will there be more?
ichkak chapter 2 . 12/4/2008
Oh very good. If you waited a year to write chapter two, another year should leave us with an amazing third!

Honestly however - don't leave it that long.

Your story proves that sex isn't just for the sake of sex. Its part of the story and part of the characters tale. They haven't just falled into a lustful state, they use is to control, cherish and communicate things they could otherwise not.

Well to be a rounded critique I would add there there just simply is not enough of it. More please, right now if possible - chuckles.
spiel chapter 2 . 12/3/2008
Wha~

Thank you very much for continueing this! :D

Though I wonder... I... would never kiss someone who just had their tongue up my ass Dx
minoki chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
wow heartfelt, poor byakuya... quite nice. i dp hope you write more of the same pairing
a panda's wrath chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
fro the of Yaoi Please continue! there is not enough Ichigo & Byakuya yaoi in fan fiction!
hershey555 chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
You should continue! It would be interesting to know what's gonna happen next to Ichi and Bya-kun's relationship 3!
Acmarache chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
I enjoyed this and think you should continue it.
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