Reviews for Once upon a time |
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VryUnique chapter 21 . 7/14 I would think Charlie would have left what he has to Bella and not Victoria. Going to next story. Don’t like on the brink of divorce part. |
MISS JXHNSXN chapter 20 . 4/14/2016 That was a great story. It was so sad but happy at the same time. The part at the cineama where the boys were running and shouting behind their backs at the girls to run was funny. Victoria got what she deserved. Very unexpected twist about victoria setting up charlie's death. Loved how Lauren and Bella rekindled their friendship. Victoria definitely deserved more time for what she did. Loved the ending where they got married and everybody was happy. All in all, it was a great shory. Well done! I congratulate you. XoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoX 333 |
Motherof8 chapter 9 . 7/25/2014 Wow |
Motherof8 chapter 6 . 7/25/2014 Good for edward |
Motherof8 chapter 5 . 7/25/2014 What a nut job she is |
Motherof8 chapter 4 . 7/25/2014 Oh oh, stepmom not going to like it. |
Motherof8 chapter 1 . 7/25/2014 Aww, poor bella |
Samantha114 chapter 10 . 1/20/2014 omg I think im gunna cry! the last few chapters have been amazing! |
I Have Left Fanfiction Good By chapter 18 . 9/27/2013 EVIL! LOL ;) |
AngelfromBeyondBelow chapter 21 . 4/18/2013 sequel please |
Motherof8 chapter 20 . 3/9/2013 Cute story, thanks for writing it |
7HockeyStarVampireObsessed7 chapter 21 . 1/15/2013 sweet story :) |
xXShadow-KissedXx chapter 5 . 11/10/2012 Emmett is so funny! Lol. His sensitive soul xD |
xXShadow-KissedXx chapter 4 . 11/10/2012 I'm hooked I can't stop reading :3 |
xXShadow-KissedXx chapter 1 . 11/10/2012 Great so far! Can't wait to keep reading (: |