This story is certainly a new take. And I can understand why you would term the story as 'darker' considering Rosette's altered history but it doesn't seem to be too dark just yet even with all the implications.

That aside are you aiming your story off of the manga or the anime?

Last review for this story, since there aren't anymore chapter, sadly. Well that emotion sync has some very unique faults.

I really like that you put Satella early in the story. When will Azmaria show up? Or has she been kidnapped by Aion already? By the way was it Satella Aion forced himself on or Florette? Satella sounds more likely though, since that also happened in the anime.

Chrono's reaction when he thought Elder was going to attack Rosette was really funny. I think he still won't appreciate every time Elder tries to grope his contractor.
The idea of Chrono having a sex buddy sounds weird, since he's the most sentimental one of the sinners and every other demon. Or is my mind that perverted and did he only Han out with her a couple of times?

So Rosette gets the full dose of Chrono's pain. Damn that sync thing really needs to be fixed. I am really curious what will happen next, so pretty please update this story is so good it deserves more chapters and reviews. My sis also likes it, maybe she'll also review this story.

Yaay the malfunctioning issue from the manga. I've read the whole manga and almost every episode from the anime. I like the manga much better. It explains more and even the characterization is better. I even pity Aion or trying to shield his brother from the truth, thought he kinda figured it out himself.

Yeah Chrono prepare for many annoying morning where you try to wake up that waking time bomb. It's only going to be worse.

Men people at that time were so stupid, thought in this age it's not that different. Aren't terrorists as dangerous as demons? At least with Chrono you can have a normal conversation. I mean they should just try to compare demons to all the other people with different religions. What they consider normal we consider it as heartless and mean like with the ritual animal sacrifice if the Muslims and Jews. Also the cultures, trying to communicate would help a lot. In the past those stupid religious idiot thought gays and lesbians were evil. have they ever killed someone? no the ones who bully them are the killers and evil ones. To bad demons don't have people like Plato and Socrates to open their eyes and THINK about live and the beings try have to share the planet with. Why do people have such a poor view about the things they don't know about?

I myself am catholic, but I like to see myself as modern catholic, one who doesn't believe everything the church an bible say.

In a way the contract with Chrono sounds a bit romantic, with all that she's mine, but not my property thing.

Wow Rosette didn't blush or examen embarrassed with Chrono in only a towel. Most girls especially when they spent their last years in a nunnery would feel uncomfortable. The ribbon does look a bit girly, but yellow is my fav color so who cares?

Geez Chrono where's your sense of humor. He was only joking, besides I'm sure after your relation ships develops more you wouldn't mind seeing her naked and prove your love to her in any possible way. *smirks*

Would Remington consider the possibility that Rosette may tell Chrono things she hasn't told anyone else? Nice he's having such a positive effect on her.

Love this chapter.

Who can refuse Rosette when she's like that? I think no one and especially he ones close to her. Geez Remington you really need to take note of the situation she's in. Every sibling would do anything possible to save their family. No matter what sacrifice they must take. Rosette is super noble in that.

I used to think that Chrono and Remington would share a bed, but I think that would be an insult to them. xD

Now that I think about it, what did Aion want with Rosette? She was just a child at that time and how did she spent her short days on Eden? Hiding in a room?

What's Chrono Crusade without the contract? Well Remington will find out about it soon, since yes quite sharp. Thought so is Rosette, surprisingly. First time I really thought she was scared of heights. I am, I can't even step into a Ferris wheel without trying to crawl I a corner with my eyes shut.

The telepathy thing is kinda awesome and disturbing at the same time. They don't have any privacy, but they can get to know each other better than anyone else can. I wonder how Chrono will handle that when she's PMSing.

I am going to review each chapter, since I didn't do it the first time. I thought I did, oww well. I really love the fact that Chrono stays in adult form. Makes it easier for Chrono and Rosette to have some romance. Man I love that pairing so much. I'd like to see her Rosette slowly unmelts his heart. He's such a nice guy and I think he'd be a great lover to Rosette, always thoughtful, worrying and caring for Rosette's wellbeing .

So this is the second time I've read this fic and I still love it. It's so different and fresh. I really hope you'll update this someday. It's a waste that most good CC haven't been updated in years.

You really have a spark here. Don't let it sit here and be forgotten. I'd love to see this story out to it's end.

Hey! Awesome story I was so into it that I finished reading the whole thing heaps quick, and I don't usually do that unless I really into something.

Please continue to write this fanfic. Please! I love it!

Oh my goodness! What fantastic writing style! I definitely love how you portray their relationship and re-written the series! Great work!

Hmm, this is intriguing. And, yeah, that story did have a TON of holes in it!

I love the story. Please write more.

Exalent! Pleace Updats Very soon I wanted to see what happens Betiwne Rosette, Chrono and Aion like how will Aion Reacted to the conteracted, and what will happen to rosette after that. so Pleae UPDATE!

hey. wow i absolutly love your story. if you ever want an opinion or a hand in betaing a chapter i would love to help. i cant wait for the next chapter. ja ne