| Reviews for A Whole New World |
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   zigmas chapter 1 . 3/20/2013 1. Sarutobi isn't his NAME, but rather CLAN NAME. These all are Sarutobis: Hiruzen, Asuma and Konohamaru. 2. Sounds interesting, but it's too short... And too OLD, just like mine... :D |
| SayHappy chapter 4 . 2/2/2010 whopwhop!next next!pleas post soon i love it and it is awsome!whopwhop! |
| SHeWithNoName chapter 4 . 4/13/2009 aww! mina is so helpful |
| Regrem Erutaerc chapter 4 . 12/17/2008 For one, Shino is quite out of character with how he's talking. Also, you had him call Mina 'Molly' instead. And also, the 'turning into bugs' means it was a bug clone, not having defeated the character through such a method. |
| Regrem Erutaerc chapter 3 . 12/17/2008 Lots of grammar errors and misuses. And Naruto cleaning without a single complaint? Out of character there. He'd still do it, yes, but without complaint is not really in character at this point in the Naruto timeline. |
| Regrem Erutaerc chapter 2 . 12/17/2008 Good writing style, but there's no way she could have known the way to the school. |
| kaikiko chapter 4 . 10/12/2008 PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE! THE STORY IS AWSOME I LOVE IT SO PLEASE WRITE OR TYPE MORE! |
| Subsonic chapter 4 . 8/20/2008 Interesting. Better update soon or the spirits will come after you! |
| Dimly chapter 4 . 8/20/2008 Yay! More to read! *Goes to read all* |
| VampireArgonian92 chapter 4 . 8/20/2008 This is a great story, please update soon! |
| Dimly chapter 3 . 6/12/2008 This seems interesting-I'd like to see more. |
| Mattricole chapter 3 . 4/29/2008 Pretty good chapter. |
| Mattricole chapter 2 . 4/29/2008 Getting better, yeah, definatly better. |
| Mattricole chapter 1 . 4/29/2008 It's a good read so far. |
| TickleMeButterfly chapter 1 . 4/21/2008 AW! Poor girl lost her granpa! That's so sad! -hggles her- |
