Wow this was so good...

That was so intense. WOW.

I love it. The way that you wrote it fits so perfectly.

Great. :)

...Wow.

This was so twisted...

I loved it. Really well written.

real good twist. could have been a bit longer considering the complexity of the plot. very interesting concept. under appreciated.

this was so good!

Woah, good story. O.O

I think it was one of the best ones I've ever read.

oh, wow. This was amazing! Man, I wish I knew whether he died or not at the end.

U r an amazin writer, I'm literalli still in shock...

U rock

Hiya M,

If you ever write a book, tell me ok I wanna pre-order and a signed copy as well! _

I don't know Naruto at all. Never seen any never read any. Credit to you that i don't need to know. This was amazing. It read right, flowed well and the twist at the end just sneaks up on you! You could have called them X, Y and Z and the story would still have the same impact!.

Very well executed - errmm no pun intended!

zan

*hugs* and hope you're good!