I take back that review it was for another story.

All the sex stopped after chapter 2 why?

This chapter should have had Genesis and Angeal appear as ghosts and had kinky halloween sex.

I love all your chapters to this story. Great work made me laugh soooo hard :D

HAHAHA. PASTEL OOH LA LA GENERAL. BEST. Sorry, I didn't even read the whole first chapter all the way through before reviewing. I just had to comment.

...I'll just continue reading now.

WHOOO BEST STORY EVER I LOVED IT SO MUCH YOU ARE AWESOME YOU MUST TEACH ME YOUR WAYS

"Fine...Shinra Flakes, EAT THEM OR WE'LL KILL YOU AND YOUR FAMILY!"

later..

"Shinra flakes,eat them." ...roflmaooooooooooooooooooooo.

"Okay," Zack smiled widely, "I drink Shinra Sport, the high energy, electronic infused-"

"Electrolyte," the director interrupted.

"That's what I said," the raven haired man frowned.

rofl..this is way too commercial chapter is the best amongst all. :D

In one word - 'Epic'!

I have got to say, the April Fools chapter was my favorite. XD

Though I did love when they shot the commercials, and the chocobo attacked Cloud...I really loved what his commercial ending up being!

OH MY GOD 3 I LOVED IT:) It made me so happy and giggly to read :)

mew. he does look like a giraffe. xD

Ahaha. Poor Puppy. Well, it was a wonderful ending to one delightful fic. I especially loved how you brought Angeal into the scheme. Though, umm, I think Sephi should buy Zack a wig. Can't have him bold too long. XD Thank you for sharing the story. I've really enjoyed reading it.

Oh, god, that was just so hilarious. XD The poor director. Never mind. He got the upper hand in the end. XD

Aww. poor Cloud. lol. I loved this chapter. The ending was just great. XD

This is so funny and delightfully written. I couldn't stop laughing. Zack has such an imagination. XD

I really really need the ambulance right now. I think i might pass out. Great job!