Hi again... I must say I'm not a fan of HOND, but I was intrigued by this story and by reading something closer to my own native language. I also apologise in advance, I'd prefer to review in Spanish, but my Spanish is pitiful. Anyway, I found this little piece truly riveting. It was simple, yet filled with exquisite poetry and quite haunting. I loved it. Lovely work on this. :D

Oh, Dios...me dejaste sin palabras. Lograste transmitirme los sentimientos encontrados de Frollo (a quien por cierto, yo también amo xD). Esa lujuria, esa frágil barrera que le separa del abismo ensordecedor al que está dispuesto a caer...

Magnífica, y amé el susurro final 'Por Dios...' el imaginarle desesperado, mirando al cielo, abatido e hincado, susurrando la blasfemia que sale de su boca...

Amé tu historia. Continúala, por favor.