Reviews for Within You
journalsandtea chapter 7 . 7/18/2018
Great story! Though you might want to go easy on the ellipsis
Sassyvampmama chapter 21 . 11/27/2017
Thanks for sharing.
MyladyNancy chapter 21 . 8/20/2017
love this excellent job
Diiawb2 chapter 21 . 7/20/2017
I love your story! I really liked the ending! Gonna go read the story you talked about in Chapter 19
ChristianMom54 chapter 21 . 7/17/2017
An interesting twist. I loved it. Well thought out. Even better without Jacob triangle. Prefect length too. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
Kolista chapter 19 . 3/20/2011
this is good keep going
Elena0017 chapter 19 . 7/11/2010
LOVE THIS CHAPTER. ARE U PLANNIN TO WRITE MORE CHAPTERS?
JiaT chapter 19 . 3/10/2010
plz plz plz complete the story... it is so good... plz
elizabeth14 chapter 19 . 10/29/2009
Wow your story is really good! What is the ending decision going to be? Please update soon!
tess pattinson chapter 5 . 7/6/2009
aw loved it
EmbersoftheNightChild chapter 19 . 4/17/2009
no cliff hanger... this is so interesting
girlpower8900 chapter 19 . 4/9/2009
WRITE MORE!
Nightongale chapter 19 . 3/15/2009
I love it. You are a wonderful writer. I hope you get the nexy chapter up soon. :)

-Night
PrettyFanGirl chapter 19 . 2/1/2009
Please tell me that you're going to update soon! That is going to annoy me so much! I love your story, It's so beautiful and well written!
PrettyFanGirl chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
So I just finished the Twilight series again and decided I'd try fantiction. Let it forever be known that yours is the first story I read.
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