You should've gone with your original plan and not gotten them back together. I hate that Naruto acted like a total dick and then got all the sympathy points in the story with his sad little woe is me act. I also hate how Sasuke comes back in the end and takes the blame for what happened onto himself in addition to deciding to give Naruto a second chance. Why would Sasuke be the one to go to Naruto? Naruto didn't put any effort into making things right. He just moped around. If he'd at least made the first move... But no. Even then that wouldn't have been enough to justify his cheating. Cheating on someone he knew Sasuke hated, that makes the cheating *personal* and is so much worse than if he'd found a random person. And even with this lesson of how much it hurts to lose Sasuke, can we really trust Naruto not to do it again? Once a cheater, always a cheater. And he cheated for such a stupid, self-centered reason. He liked being wanted by two powerful people. He thought cheating with Neji would be easier than talking to Sasuke about the things that were bothering him in the relationship. So self-centered! And the whole time Sasuke and Naruto were apart, Naruto wallowed in his own misery. Why didn't he make any effort to find out if Sasuke was OK or see how he was doing? He cared more about his own pain than the pain he'd caused Sasuke, and that's the real problem with their relationship.

naruto didnt deserve to get taken back. first of all, worst excuse for cheating EVER that just made him seem like a horrible and spoiled person. and second of all, the fact that he moved in with neji right after sasuke left him shows that he cared more about having somebody there than getting the trust of the one he supposedly loves back. i think naruto, in character, is a good and honest person ... in this story hes despicable and was written like he should be the villain, not the protagonist, of a story

wow...this story was just...wow! I love to see stories like this when i'm in my moods, and this story earned a hard 10/10!

I really like this, good plot and characterization. My only complaint is it's too short xDDD

good job :)

that was a nice story!

i've just made an account on and i'm really excited and i'm crazily adding people who i lyk into my favourite... i've faved you into my favourites and your story

I reaaaaalllly luv it...

i dunna about you but i don't really like nejinaru. though narusasu's nice... very nice. LOL.

nothing to flame about since i luved it too much to flame.:3

i relie lyked it.
i really hate najinaru... i dunno why
narusasu tops all other couples. but of course it's only a hot act if sasu-chans bottoming lyk the cute little uke he is.

anyway, back to your story(i ramble to much) It was realy nice. i'm so glad
sasu-chan decided to come and visit naruto...
It was sweet.
absolutely no flames.
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Oh wow I loved this! Finally a Narruto cheating fic that's finished! THANK YOU! :)

Heartwrenching, and amazing as well.

awhh

please add a second chapter! its so good! ahehehe!

yes yes yes! im absolutly in love with this fic! in my opinion its too perfect. SasuNaru and Nejinaru...love both. Neji does hold serious similarities to Sasuke too. i cant wait to read more from you.

Wow, this is a really nice story. I love all of this drama that you put into it. I can not wait to see the next chapter.

Aw, here I am again, getting all caught up and upset over a story! Not many stories can actually have me hanging on the edge, feeling sad (yes, I was all "WTF? NO... Sasuke and Naruto have to get back together!), and then feeling hopeful when they discuss getting back together.

You did a wonderful job; I always really love reading your stories... and why I didn't read this one when I got the alert in my inbox... -.-;

~Elric-Chan

great story as always and i hope you dont stress yourself to much on the updating

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-HEP-

this was the best story ever and iv read a lot write a lot more ok