| Reviews for Losing Fabian Prewett |
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RavenEcho chapter 2 . 1/19/2010 Cute. :) |
You Know chapter 2 . 8/24/2009 I wonder where the singed eyebrows idea came from? :) Sorry, can't be bothered signing in. I like the idea of her kicking Gilderoy! Hehehe, you should continue this one. Sentences ran together a little, but it was good! Amy |
lyin chapter 2 . 6/20/2008 ha, Gilderoy the pink prefect- a few sentences are a bit run-on and jumbled and i wasn't sure why it was 'as you walked through'; but i like the idea of dorcas and hestia as friends and the prewetts as friends w/ Mundungus, as well as the detail of the pink english muffin. :D nice drabble/flashback, good luck and keep writing! |
lyin chapter 1 . 6/20/2008 ah, one of the pairings i really personally like- love the detail of his terrible cooking skills (a few more specifics could make the piece a touch stronger) and nineteen-year-old has hyphens; but a very human Hestia who's easy to relate to- esp/ w her honeyduke's chocolate as comfort- and helps make sense why she's in the 2nd Order but the first. nice job, keep writing! |
scribbl chapter 2 . 3/29/2008 haha gilderoy lockhart :) i like this one. its cute :) very nice. xoxos :) |
scribbl chapter 1 . 3/29/2008 so sad... very nice. xoxos :) |
mackgirl chapter 2 . 3/24/2008 Aw this was sweet. |
amortentiaaa chapter 2 . 3/24/2008 We know Dumbledore is all into love, but even so far as to encourage young love and dating? hm. Poor Hestia. At least she's got enough sense not to snog Gilderoy. |
amortentiaaa chapter 1 . 3/23/2008 Mm, you like Hestia, eh? |
Ky-lassassin chapter 1 . 3/23/2008 Aw, poor Hestia! I assume this is the "Honeyduke's best chocolate" prompt? Update soon! Kyota |
mackgirl chapter 1 . 3/22/2008 Aww, this made me tear up. Great job! |