This is a genuinely lovely chapter, and a sweet ending to the story. Very evocative.

Beautiful chapter. Well written and nicely balanced. Nicely hot also.

This is a great opening chapter - very morish...

Loved it!

Wow... I loved the ending, the simple, matter of fact way in which they confessed their love was simply breathtaking, the way it should be, not some overly showy, romantic display of uncharacteristic openess.

:D lol that was complicated.

I love the way you wrote this, so beautiful :]

I really loved this story - the warmth and tenderness expressed is priceless! One of my favourites : )

Loved this, brilliantly written - especially Harry's response to hearing Ruth say she loved him! "I love you too. Now, do you want Marmalade?" typical bloke response!

Very enjoyable and well-written piece. Thanks.

Sighs with pleasure - sweet and tender and perfect and well written and, and, and - I need to go and re-read it yet again!

That was utterly, beautifully gorgeous! I nearly cried...in a good way!

xx

Wow Lynn - awesomeness by the bucket loads. So many emotions in this chapter :D I loved the bit with Ruth crying and Harry comforting her and the "I love you's" at the end are beautiful. "So you want Marmalade?" "I love you." lol fabulous :D Had me squeeing like a mad woman :D Thank you for posting this fic. It really cheered me up :D

He caught hold of her arm as she started to turn away from him. “Don’t go, please.” Vulnerable Harry :D I love it Lynn. Ruth has certainly found some courage at last squee :D Awesome chapter - the perfect amount of tenderness. :D

"It wasn’t much of a story but it would have done as an excuse to keep her sitting next to him for a few more minutes." This is such a sweet line Lynn. I especially love the way you have written Harry throughout this chapter. It seems so real and so very like their characters. Brilliant hon. x

Perfect!

OMG - I like this new assertive Ruth.(Nothing more to say!)