Very well written :) My favourite scene was that awkward Deidara hard-on from the other chapter xD

So cute! Awesome story!

That was so cute !
I am glad all ended well ! Happy endings are so great. Your story was beautiful !

I just noticed in the months that I'm reading Sakura fanfictions as a hobby I come to realize that DeiSaku fics are my favorites and have loved so much, not just because Deidara happens to be my fave Akatsuki member and Sakura's the person that I look up to in my whole life, but also because they just have that chemistry I think (I wish they have more interactions in canon oh well sadly not) almost all the DeiSaku fic that I've read are all perfect and especially that the authors are writing their characters in canon as possible..

Well anyway, I really love Naruto and Sakura's portrayal of their precious friendship here that a lot of fanfictions couldn't portray right. And I also love Itachi, Shikamaru, and Sakura's impromptu theorization THAT IS so cool actually that whole scene in Hokage's office are cool, you've done a good job there author-san. And of course the plot itself is amazing well-thought with the mixed of canon scenes. Also, the way DeiSaku's feelings are written and Naruto's as well really made me sad and left tears in me.
Dunno if you still have a chance to read this comment author-san, but lemme tell you that this is so good and thanks for sharing this on us!

xoxo

Oh Kami this chapter just make my heart constrict in sadness.. oh poor Naruto and Sakura ohmygosssh this chapter is just... sad :

who's cutting onions right now? Cause I'm sure as hell my tears aren't stopping from their trek on my cheeks

Now Deidara is what you call charismatic. Great first chapter

Great fic!

This fanfic is probably the best Saku/Dei fic that I've read! It really draws the reader in and has a plausible, well-thought-out plot. Thank you for your hard work!

It’s a good happy ending !

*screammmmmmm* I’m waiting for their return and it turns out best!

This chapter is full of great points and writing style!

I feel like they’re newly wedded awww

This chap’ blow my mind!

I totally love your story! It’s very beautiful and how you build up their relation is very natural.

I love this chapter! I don’t know why but it is a good mixture and chemistry!