Very interesting.

*Rejoices*

Aw, Skywarp. I'm excited for their (eventual?) reunion! Yay for your writing!

This is so good!

Very good.

Next chapter?

I thought this started a little slow, but I think you've got the ball rolling. It took me til chapter 3, but I'm interested.

Didn't care for the 'date/time' stuff, but using 'places' for the scene changes would be good. Keep it going.

Yah! You updated! :)

That’s ok that nothing exciting happened this chapter I'm just glad you didn't abandon this story or anything like that. I liked Blur’s little therapy session with Screamer though, looks like he's not going to get any answers out of the seeker.

As for the dates/time/place stuff I'm indifferent to the whole thing. If you like it I’d say you should keep it up then. I would so help you out too, but I doubt I would be of help... I lack creativity and get most of my ideas from friends. I’m stuck on my own stories too so I feel for you :(

Hope you don’t have too much trouble with the next chapter, I can’t wait to read.

lol, i didn't think he time things where that helpful, so i just skipped them

anwya, this chapter is so good. poor starscream, blurr asking those questions must have been annoying

i can't wait to see what happened to starscream int he past

Finally, i was wondering what happend to this story, poor starscream, lol, i love the way you make him act in this story, pls keep going

...I LOVE Starscream (especially fra Armada) And you've really captured his peronality well. As you say "is forever neurotic and tempremental", but ultimately a good guy deep down who made some wrong decisions in his life, and suffering under it.

I adore the Optimus/Starscream interaction (If I squint hard, can I see a bit of Op/SS shipping?) ;-) I like the fact that Stascream can shake Optimus' calm and slightly uptight facade and that Optimus can frustrate Starscream by being...well...an autobot. XD

I hope you update soon.

~KaraQ

Starting to lose hope it would be updated, but this chapter was worth the wait. Liked the ending, it gave me a chuckle or two.

Yay, you've updated!

Liked the psychologic discussions and stuff :*)

Spotted an "ulterior" word misspelled, in a very otherwise neat and easy to read text.

YES! YOU UPDATED! :DD Loved this chap. You write Optimus and Starscream just right.

Hope you update soon! :D

I love the way you portray Starscream, I could so see him as an assassin since he's a seeker and their quick on their feet and agile.

Hope you update really soon, this is a really good story!

I like it! And I love Starscream and the way you wrote him.

Hope you update soon!

Wonderful story! Very interesting!