Reviews for Rough Drafts
raynesupreme chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Ahhh...I love this. River trying to cause trouble and Jayne being all romantical! Great little story with lots of feeling!
Tuuna chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Naaaw... I agree with River, simple can be beautiful :D
jenefaner chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Way cute!
Shadowcatisajerk chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
Very sweet, thanks.
icebreather chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
There were several lines of this that really stood out to me, but I especially liked the last two. Nice.
bluhr chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
Aw, cute. That last letter is definitely the most Jayne-ish one. Very concise :D
River4Jayne chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
So cute! i love it!
jane0904 chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Really sweet. Now, how do the others react?
Kristafied chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
This is adorable. Both are totally in character and poignantly funny.
vampout chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
hahaha brilliant! too bad its a one shot! wish it was more :( GREAT JOB THOUGH!
badkarma00 chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
That was priceless. Perfect. Well done!
Ookami Sakura chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
this was so cute, I loved it! You should try to turn this into a series of one shots, that would be really cool.
FabledFigment chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Love the emotion and the tugging feeling. Especially like the part where River is trying to convince herself not to look at the papers.
jcap1526 chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Oh, this is so original and cute! I've read your other stories and this is quite possibly my favorite.