so sweet

Aww wow, that was amazing.

I do like a bit of BB angst as long as it ends in some majoy fluff like this did :)

I love everything about this, from the story line to the lay out of the writting. It was so clear to read and easy follow.

Great job at keeping them in character aswell!

Love how it was broken up into four chapters aswell, each fight different to the others.

Perfect.

x

OMG I just recently read this fic and I loved

That was a great story ! But is it me or the third and the fourth chapters are the same ?

Ok, so you're quite good at writing, and i like your style but I think you should read it aloud before you post it because sometimes things don't make sense or you've switched from past to present or present to past and that gets a little confusing. Also you may want to check where you put words that are said the same but spelt differently because a couple of times they have been a bit muddled. But other than that it is really good!

OMG i loved that

it was such a great fic

well done x

aw cant believe shed leave him for him wanting to be her knight in shining FBI armour

another great chapter though

x

aww that was sad :(

tempe does often 4get dates

and she is addicted to her work

aw i loved that

glad they made up :)

I loved this whole thing. It's written beautifully and I can see perfectly their little lovers spats lol. Once again brilliant.

loved it. it was a great story. i loved the way you handeled it.

that was really touching and well-written

First i've got to say that this fic is what i consider to be your personal best, each chapter (especially the last one, sully's return is the best fight ever)is fantastic and so exquistly written that all the emotions, feelings, urges, pains and sorrows can be felt in every bone (pardon the pun) of your body. That being said, as your beta reader i congratulate you will all my might, because you have done with this fic what i've seen in very few written things, you've done a masterpiece.

You know, it's not often that I review each and every chapter of an already completed fic, but this one was so wonderful that I HAD to write a little something for each. I think chapters two and three were only one or two worded reviews, but ya know. :)

Wonderful. Just simply wonderful.

HBF

Aww, wonderful.