OMNIVERSE 18 YEAR OLD BEN AND ROOK IN NARUKUS REVENGE NARUKU AND VILGAX WITH CRONOS AND EVIL CLOCKWORK TEAMS UP VILGAX HELP NARUKU REGENERATE FASTER GOES TO INUYASHAS TIME KAGOMES BROTHER
CAME HOME FROM SCHOOL AND CALLS BEN ON HIS CELL WITH THE AILEN NOTE SAYING
DEAR BEN I TEAMED UP WITH NARUKU AND AN EVIL CLOCKWORK NAMED CRONOS WE WENT TO THE ERA 10 YEARS AFTER INUYAHA DEFEATED NARKU COME AND GET US

liked it but i think it would be cooler if Eon was in it like in the woods when inuyahsa has him corrned Eon hits Inuyasha out cold with one of his attack and drags ben away when grampa max come in and saves him only for inuyasha barge in

This was REALLY good! I loved it! Please do a sequel, I would love it if you did a sequel!

make a seqal and have inuyasha win not ben but i will admet that befor i found inuyasha i would wathch ben 10 24/7 but now that i'v learnd aboult inuyasha i think that ben 10 i stubed and that inuyasha is the best show in the world so make a seqal P.S i am addicted to INUYASHA!

please take this mesag into thought ,

Bridgie P. age 11

yes I am addicted at only 11 so don't ask me aboult it.

ben unlocks a another aien wich turns out to be godzilla! :)

WHAT! NO NUMBER 2! tells godzilla godzilla gets mad detroys city etc etc etc

Great story! It is really interesting!

I am not a beta reader or anything but you used peoples names way to often and siad things like, then inuyasha, then ben, then inuyasha all the time.

Please write a sequel!

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