Reviews for Maelstrom of Emotions
Guest chapter 7 . 10/11/2019
Thank you.
Mila Pink chapter 7 . 3/6/2018
I liked a quite this story.
It was intense and lovely.
Kiss
Isshiki Satoshi chapter 2 . 9/4/2017
Wait...so now is he a blonde or redhead...what about his freakish height?
bartlettpear chapter 7 . 8/20/2017
Yay for resolution, finally, everything got fixed and they are free to be happy together with no more secrets. I like how it felt symmetrical that they both had a different form and it was like a fresh start again. Thank you for writing!
bartlettpear chapter 6 . 8/20/2017
I am actually ok with them not being end game at this point. It felt big of Sasuke to resign and be over with it. Naruto hurting himself by sticking to a promise that hurts his heart to keep and for him and poor Hinata with what she knows in her heart of hearts if she accepts to live in misery together is their problem. Whoa thank god for Hinata, I had hope in my heart she wouldn't be stupid like Naruto settling like that so for it to pan out like this was a freaking relief. That moment between Sakura and Hinata, and then Sakura confronting Naruto was sorely needed. Sasuke's I love you more and I'm sorry you lost Hinata felt like a healing balm for all the heartbreak. I am glad Naruto not getting permission before he left was touched upon and getting to see what the situation with Naruto's people are in regards to that. It feels like Sasuke and Naruto are on their honeymoon, I am glad they unburdened their hearts to each other. Ugh, Kiba. At least Naruto cut down further attacks with the way he stopped him. Their visit with Tsunade went really well. Hinata handled herself well with Naruto and I am glad Sasuke thanked her. Her tears and conflicting feelings were understandable.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/20/2017
Sasuke, that's so fucked up ;_; Poor Naruto.
And that's also fucked up of Naruto, poor Hinata :-( And it comes back to Sasuke and Naruto being messed up again, these two are ridiculously toxic orz
bartlettpear chapter 4 . 8/20/2017
The kiss and few more that came after really happened, whoa. Poor Naruto in turmoil. Their dance of dodging and retaliating at the enemies together was really cool. Naruto getting to see Sasuke want to kiss him and curse when he couldn't made me smile. I like this stronger Hinata, poor her though. Great timing Kakashi, that was funny. Having Sasuke carry his flower was cute though I think it might be Sasuke's flower and he was covering for him? Omg these two. Sakura being pissed off at them made me laugh. Are Sai and Sakura a couple? It would be nice for something to happen to reassure him of Sakura's feelings for him if that is the case. That's nice of them to invite Sai, but isn't Yamato also Team 7? Poor Yamato not included. Yikes, tense dinner. Sakura confronting Sasuke was good, that silent treaty was badass. I am hoping Sai heard that conversation because it seems like it should settle his fear. Oh, they're engaged. That's really unfortunate they don't have her parents' blessing. Damn, he either didn't hear the conversation or only saw that last part. That was cruel, well, at least that is cleared up but I'm still waiting for Sai to apologize to Sakura.
bartlettpear chapter 3 . 8/20/2017
Wow, Naruto's misunderstanding of Sasuke's intentions is so far out of the ball park, it's not even funny. Naruto's fox charms failing to charm Sakura made me laugh. Sakura and Sasuke's exchange was pleasant and warm, what a lovely difference from the old days. Kakashi getting them to do genin's tasks together for old time's sake was sly. Kakashi chastising Naruto and Sakura for chatting was funny. Everyone feeding Naruto is interesting. Kakashi bluntly stating Sasuke's intention was smooth and then Naruto calling him out on chatting this time around was funny.
Aah! I totally didn't expect that kiss, I love how tickled Sakura and Kakashi were by it. I am so happy I was doubtful of the whole thing and it turned out to really be a dream lol Yeah...I can totally see why people continue to feed Naruto, he doesn't seem to make it a priority to feed himself. Sasuke's teasing Naruto was funny. I like Hanzaki and Karin. I am guessing Sasame might be from the anime, her name looks familiar. Omg Sasuke, getting a key to sneak into Naruto's room is a terrible idea. Kuwata seems like a good guy :-) Hanabi means well but Hinata knows what's up. I like how we got to learn from Juugo how intuitive Suigetsu is. Nice way to wrap it up and thank you for the author's note. I don't know if the kiss will be successful.
bartlettpear chapter 2 . 8/19/2017
I like Sasuke's surprise at having to get used to the idea of living with Kakashi and Iruka, it sort of feels like he is a foster or step child. Your description of the Kakashi and Iruka pairing was on point, but it endeared the couple to me lol The tension, new dynamics were fascinating. I feel bad for Hinata, I hope Naruto doesn't end up cheating on her. Sasuke gaining the strength he wanted and more is nice, that came back after everything for Naruto was surprising. That it was obviously too late was unfortunate.
Return of da Man chapter 7 . 5/17/2017
Wow!
WolfieLiz chapter 7 . 11/22/2014
so hot! so much emotions! my eyes!
Tank you very very veeeery much for posting it!
Celestialfae chapter 3 . 3/24/2011
Finally someone brings back a filler character in their fanfiction stories. I have been waiting so long for someone to put in Sora there. But all i get is Sora from Kingdom Hearts. Never a filler especially when Sora is so-smoking-HOOOOOTTTT;)

Yay, from a girls standpoint he is.
rokudaime09 chapter 7 . 3/20/2011
it was si damn good. banzai!
Nekomata Uchiha chapter 7 . 6/6/2010
Hello ... again ...

Another wonderful fic, I liked it, too definitely adore your writing seriously ...

Do not know what else to say, has been wonderful and I have control again carried with them ...

Saludos ...
Sakiq-Sakik chapter 7 . 3/12/2010
this is REALLY good!
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