Brilliantly funny!

Damn! Im in love with ur Stories... all of it! u have done the best here...

Keep it up... Will be waiting for it

Heeeehhh! So funny I felt my ribs creak from laughing-and you know it's bad when you can actually feel a noise! Your pace was well set, your use of vocabulary spectacular, and your inspection of each character complete and completely enthralling!

Ahahahaaa xD

Loved the ending 3

I'd say Robin is quite in character, I think she talks more with less people around.

*breathes in*

THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!

Why didn't I realise earlier that this fic even existed?

It's great!

I loved it!

(as you probably can see, I I'm out of words for this fic)

But really, it was very well-thought, and all the characters were absolutely spot-on!

I adored the way you made Nami so...evil! :D

And Robin so level-head, Sanji so...eager, Usopp so funny, Chopper so naive, Zoro so thick, Franky so funky and Luffy...so Luffy.

Your fic made me laugh a lot, especially sentences like 'sending the three boys (well, one boy, one rubberman and one reindeer) flying'. Or Usopp's story about stuffing all the sea-kings teeth under his pillow XD.

Loved that!

And I must agree with Robin, all of the boys have their own kind of intelligence.

I'm running out of words again, but one thing I can tell you is that this is an AMAZING story that should have way more reviews!

Love it! Very much!

"all notions of choosing a winter of the ‘intelligence competition'" - "winner" instead of "winter"

otherwise very entertaining :-)

The guys are all smart in intuition I guess. But they're not that smart in brains... Sanji is a bit though. Tricky little boy.

Nami is smart in brains but she's very hopeless in intuition and wel... becuase the things that the guys are smart in.

Robin's just smart in brains and intuition.

Mau... they all have their own way of intelligence.

When i saw that this had like 10,0 words, i almost didn't read it. Then I changed my mind.

This was really well written.

This is in no ways a flame I sware, I just state facts

This was pretty good, I always enjory a good laugh, I liked how you had Robin point out that each of the guys has a different kind of intelagence,

Chopper has book smarts medical knowledge takes lots of study and time,

Sanji has planning smarts due to being a melee fighter with no wepons he has to plan his moves, also a cook has to have a very good memory to prepare as many different dishes specialized for a group like the crew,

Usopp has creatitivy smarts his weapons are VERY effective and not everyone has the gift of the silver tounge like he does (he did get several dials by trading rubberbands,

Franky has skill smarts carpenders and shipwrights have a TON of skill,

Zoro has instenctual smarts, though his sense of direction sucks he does wield 3 swords, to do so requires muscle memory of teneques also as robin said he is werry of smart people,

Luffy has people smarts. Of them Luffys is probably the strongest, his ability to read a person and to be able to tell what they are realy like is almost at the levels of an empath

I disagree though with your AN at the biggining about the crew not being able to love, Nami,Zoro,and Robin have luggage that makes them very closed and guarded, Usopp does love kaya, I mean searosly she SHOT him and he still fought to protect her to the point of clinging onto Kuro's leg just to slow him down. Luffy though...while he may be simple, love ant gotta be complicated, keep in mind after finding Nami and learning her past, he only acted when she asked him to, he respected her wishes of not interfearing, then when she asked for help he leveled Arlong Park, also he carried her up a mountian waring shorts and a vest with sanji on his back to get her to a doctor. Also nami is the only person so far he trust with his hat. He has shown a form of brotherly love for most of the crew helping them whenever asked, or even when not, declaring war on the EARTH WORLD GOVERNMENT takes a little more than friendshinp. The crew dosent act like friends, they act like a famly, people will go a long way for famly, even if they dont like them. (Zoro the cool older brother, Franky the perverted uncle everyone clames not to be related to and so forth) I do however think you underplayed Luffy a bit, you missed some of the biggest things he did to show his brain power, while fighting he was pretty smart using the water to protect himself, also against arlong he went after arlongs wepons (Nose and Teeth) though simple as you said, he has a knack for sensing what the real problem is, or the biggist threat in a fight. The only other thing I will pick on is how you described Nami, her love of gold (normal for most females) is more like a tie to her past, simaler to sanji, she spent so many years hording cash to buy her village, its a part of who she is, same with sanji, hes so "stingie" with food because he knows what its like to starve (past with red zeff) Over all I give your story a 8.9, you did a good job, and the part where Nami listed off all of Luffy's screw ups was so realistic I could see it in my head.

I look foward to seeing more from you in the future.

Tobi's a good boy!