why thankyou! i know i say some random things, but i'm just weird. some day i'll merry Justin Beiber. I LOVE JUSTIN BEIBER!

ZUKO HAS BOOBS!

ok whoever this justinbeiberisHOT chick is, says some pretty random stuff. so do you really like justin beiber? :(

OH YOWKIES! I LOVE THE STORY. IT IS SO CUTE! JINX AND GIZMO ARE AS CUTE AS A COW ON A RAINY DAY, ITS UTTER GLOWING IN THE MOONLIGHT. I ALSO LOVE JUSTIN BEIBER! HE REMINDS ME OF A BIRTHING OVEN ON SUNDAY WHEN YOUR TOILET GETS CLOGGED. HE IS SO HOT! HE ROCKS! HE IS LIKE SUPER CUTE! JUSTIN AND ME FOREVER!

Whoa. Gizmo is such a devious guy!

Keep the good writing.

As always, awesome chapter. Raven and Terra were simply wonderfully done.

Keep the good writing.

Gizmo, Mikron, whatever he goes by, is a mastermind. He has done something no villian before him, how great or small, has achieved. He has taken over the world. Mentally, at least.

Sincerely,

Raven of Alaska

You use an interesting style. Very wordy but not in a useless way or self congratulatory way. Still, it can be a bit tough going at times though, in the end, worthwhile.

The first time I read this chapter I wasn't into it enough or in the right frame of mind and didn't really care for it. It still seemed a bit dense the second time but I appreciated it much more.

Hopefully Raven gets that Titan flare lit up so she can help fight the growing threat, whatever it may be.

Sincerely,

Raven of Alaska

I'm adoring the grit of this tale. It's nice to see a writer really dig in and twist knives, rather than sparing the character and reader.

I wait with happy expectation for more.

-Reika

Very engrossing. I think you've got the Nightwing-Red X conversation about right. They probably would just keep talking past each other. Still, one can't help but want to take both of them by the shoulders and shake 'em.

And, KF letting Robin and the others even think he might have gone bad if that's what it took to save Jinx? That's my boy.

SpeedstersBats

So, the government started killing supervillians. I wonder how this will affect the rest of the story. Bad memories for those who survived, I'm sure.

Sincerely,

Raven of Alaska

Yeah... diabolically smart. Excellent job with the evil plot, and wonderful one with Nightwing; tnis story is perfectly written.

Keep the good writing.

This is getting hard to understand because I've enver read the comics, but I'll keep trying. It's really good though, like, really really good. More soon please.

Great story! I really like it. Will Raven be in this series?