Spent way too much time reading this - but it was such a great story I just had to read it start to finish in one day!

Usually not a fan of cross-overs. But had mused myself how Gibbs and O’Neill would get along. So many similarities. Relationship too close too fast in this story considering their personalities. But still a fun read. Thanks for writing so many years ago.

Your last sentence did make me laugh, so I'd say your story was a success :)
I thought your characterization of each fandoms and how they interacted was very good. Loved the O'neill and Gibbs interaction. They are very interesting characters to put together and you did it very well.

Positively fantastic

Very nice humor mixed in with seriousness, naked for a good combo

Yay. Tensions and intrigue are building i like that, very much.

Damn good prologue. Youve peaked my interest.

Very enjoyable story.

Actually, I did. If the case is presumably wrapped up in chapter l7, and there are still l6 chapters, I can figure out fairly easily that there are complications in store.

A VERY good read, thank you, involving 2 of my favorite people, Gibbs and 0'Neill (both of whom could stand to have their butts kicked on occasion, however).

this was amazing

Incredible story! I really enjoyed it! I loved Jack's last question to Sam!

Poor Arthur Makepeace. It still sadden me to read story in which someone tortured and killed eventhough it was just fiction. Because I know it happen in real life. Anyway, this is great story. Thank you for making it.

Carter could totally make it fly! She's like a super genius! :-)

Really loved it - this is a cross-over that definitely works. I think your characterization of both Jack and Jethro is right on.