| Reviews for Broken |
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   VladimirsAngel chapter 1 . 11/1/2002 *sighs* This was so sweet...congrats on a really well-crafted piece. I've been trying to write A.I. stuff for a while but I can't seem to get an handle on it. Keep writing! _ |
| sprite-chan chapter 1 . 4/13/2002 i loved this one. |
| Daae chapter 1 . 3/29/2002 Wow... that was really sad. I always was confused as to whatever happened to Joe after the movie. I loved A.I.- it deserved some Oscars (if Pearl Harbor managed to win 2, A.I. should have won at least one!) :) Good Job |
| Ivy chapter 1 . 3/8/2002 Whoa... now that was something. ... I never really wondered what happened to Joe after the movie. I wish that fic would have being a bit more developed but it kinda seem to have a proper length somehow. Maybe it wouldn't have the same effect if it was longer. Anyway, very good job ;_; |
| Olivia chapter 1 . 11/4/2001 Aww, god that's depressing! :( But very well done. |
| poetrygurl chapter 1 . 10/10/2001 Okay, here's the deal... I absolutely hated the movie, but this story was so good and so emotional, heart-wrenching. It socked me in the gut and made me think. It's sad and very well-written. I was going to write a flame, no matter who's story it was, but this is just too good to. I'm sorry if I offended you, lol, but this is wonderful! The way the writing is a bit choppy and/or cut-off a bit adds to the flavor and uniqueness that these are thoughts. Very well done! I appraise you and hand my work to your mercy, hoping you'll go easy on me. |
| Darrel Doomvomit chapter 1 . 10/9/2001 do you realy think a.i. neede a epilogue? |
| Kit Thespian chapter 1 . 10/6/2001 Awwww...Joe had a heart after all...I loved his character. Now I feel so sorry for him. Poor Joe... |
| SoulPariah chapter 1 . 10/4/2001 wow..watch me cry...that was special...i have wondered what happened to Joe after David..he just kinda disappeared from the movie...i really like it! write more! |
| Opapea chapter 1 . 9/30/2001 Short 'n sweet. I like! |
| TylerJRM7 chapter 1 . 9/29/2001 um... sad and cool? |
| ghj62 chapter 1 . 9/29/2001 Whoops! I meant to say "Fire from Heaven" in my previous review of this story. |
| Sapphire Rose chapter 1 . 9/26/2001 Nice! I likes! |
| ghj62 chapter 1 . 9/25/2001 Wow, Laurie, you really did a good job at presenting two very unique perspectives of Joe. I really like how your A.I. stories stick to the theme of focusing on the emotional side of androids just like the movie. Its also nice to see how Joe still cares so much about David even though he only met him for a brief, yet memorable time. And in a way, this story ties in with your main concept mentioned in your previous story "Fire in the Sky." I'll be back for more. |
| Laurie E. Smith chapter 1 . 9/24/2001 Thanks, SK, that's a tremendous compliment... and thank you, Henry! _ If you want to watch Joe "evolving", keep your eyes on "Fire From Heaven", also available on at . ?actionstory-read&storyid404878 |
