Fluer, Nymphadora, and Gabby should be severely punished if not stripped of their rank and kicked out of the service they are in. All of them repeatedly refuse to follow orders. Their refusal also fucked everything up. If I were Harry I would not trust them. If they can’t do what they are supposed to, they can’t be relied on to do the job or watch others backs. This author only has stupid characters.

Fuck you. Hope you die in a house fire and slowly burn to death mother fucker.

I’ve lost interest. Your characters are fucking stupid so I can only imagine this author is a fucking idiot as well.

This is an amazing story. It’s sad it hasn’t been updated in years but I look forward to the day it is.

I really hate it when people say that 'Our fates are resting on his shoulder' or some bullshit like that. What are you, a cripple.

awesome story im sorry to see it abandoned

story is good please carry on

I hope you decide to pick this up again it is soooooo good.

Damn. What a place to leave it!

This was very good story enjoyed it very very much look forward to you picking it up again and finishing it thank you for writing it

Please update

Just reread this story for like the 5th time. Really wish it wasn't abandoned :(

I wonder why the author quit writing this story. It was a good story.

I know there is probably no hope for this story, but wow, this was amazing! I loved it, I would so want to know what happens next!

Seriously? Hermione?
To read your story, we need to suspend all belief and I'm saying that on a fabric site!
Your story just jumps and uses unconvincing plot points.