Yay Pam/Toby. I like Jim/Pam, but I think Toby and Pan are great together. Really like your fic. Nicely done. Especially the scene where Pam kisses Toby after Michael's retort. Cute. )

This was amazing! I just stumbled across this story and it was beatuiful. I'm a HUGE fan of Pam/Toby. Aren't they the sweetest? LOL. If your interested in any other stories of them, I'm currently writing the epic tale, Awkward Admiration. It's an AU of Season 3 if Toby actually asked Pam what he was going to ask her in 'The Convention'. I hope you check them out and leave a review. This was very beatuiful and gave me more intiative to finish the story! Great job!

I just realized I hadn't reviewed this which is silly, because it's in my favourite stories and because I really like it. So yeah, I'm reviewing. I like that Ryan and Kelley got married, even though it wasn't like explored in depth, it was a cute thing to add. And I do like Toby and Pam as a couple, even though it's hard to see Jim sad like that. At least he found someone, too. I liked the description of Pam and Toby's reunion scene, and their development through Jim's eyes, it was interesting how you wrote it with a lot of description and not so much dialogue.

This story struck me as kind of sad yet kind of happy at the same time. I thought the characterizations were really good. Kevin's divorce pool for the Ryan/Kelly wedding was way funny, and definitely seemed like something that would happen in the show.

you have done the impossible. you made me, the most intense jim/pam fan like ever, like a story that was not jim/pam. its a serious miracle. but the way you wrote pam and toby was just so perfect, and i usually absolutely detest and despise all other parings, jim/karen, pam/toby, pam/ryan, anything that is not jim/pam, but there is something about this story that is just so cute. like i can totally picture that. though not really because jim is in love with pam and pam is in love with jim and they are going to get married and have adorable babies, but in an alternate universe, i would so want this to happen because it is cute, in its own pam/toby way. so good job.