That was so sweet! It's amazing for your first Zelda story!

I know, I laugh to, I thought she was gonna kill me. Like when I told is a I wouldn't pay the 10 ruppees she said"what makes you think you have a choice?!well be prepared, cause your going on a long way mister!" I just sighed and laughed.

Excellent

:O

Oh man, that scared me at first too. I thought she was going to attack me or something .;

and then when she didn't i just ignored her.

Nicely written, I enjoyed reading it. )

Heheh, interesting! And very cute!

Good job! I like the way you didn’t make Link physically say anything. I don't know why, but it made the story that much more enjoyable.

That was pretty original!

Good work!

Good story and such. I though the bug attack was a little random, but it was very good nonetheless. Write more stuff or something.