If this story won't make a person cry I don't know what will...

Not ashamed to say I'm crying after finishing this great story.

i cried

Poor Dawn. :(

I knew there was more to Dawn's story than Ash thought. Like the prequel, this was very emotional and very sad.

Wow, I can't believe it had to be like this but dang...so dark and so mind-numbing. A job well done on the story, I would love to see more stories from authors like you.

"It just took some courage to speak up, yet it didn't happen."

Amazing story... But I sorta guessed the baby's name was going to be Dawn.

Anyways, Great Story

I thought the tradition last name for Dawn in FanFic was Berlitz, not Gold. But then again, its your story.

O man, now that is cold... But then again, Dawn had it coming so I don't blame her. But feeling happy over a ex-friend's death? A little mad... lol, just kidding. Good story so far!

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I'm keeping my hands down...I didn't cry :P

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on to the point, I know it's a lot too ask but I think it would be good to use her REAL last name, Berlitz.

Interesting

before i read dawns letter i hated for what you had turned dawn into.

P.S i still hate you for killing dawn and turning ash and may into a i nearly cried whildt reading this.

ASH & DAWN FOREVER!

Nice story man

I was quite surprised when this story is about pearlshipping reading the first two chapters . . . I got to admit . . .

your flick really got to me . . .

NICE STORY

...cool, but Brocks mom is dead, according to 4kids

Auggh! that is so depressing! T-T i almost shed tears. yet it was an excellent piece of work. a very good way of combining love and death. nice work, very nice work