Sakura is so strong that she could take his blade and shove itlmao

F it, this WHOLE thing was perfect! I mean- I love Temari so much, but I typically have a thing for reading stories where she was abused. Mostly by her father as a child. Although I'm not a fan of abusive relationships, you made the one thing I hate most work in a way I loved! It was awesome!

one of the best stories ever

so good make more ShikaTemari stories please they are so good all of them

emotional wow that was amazing yeth

so good

this a great fanfic so far like the rest of yours that amazing

I agree! its not that OOC if u think about it! but, seriously, LOL! shikamaru's mom is so adorable!

Personally, I think Shikamaru was OOC here. He's a genius and an analytical thinker. If he really wanted to attack Ryota, he would have thought it all out so it could work. He would never have been as foolish as that.

Otherwise, I'm glad Shikamaru and Temari got their happily ever after and that she doesn't have to marry Ryota. I'm so glad Gaara supports a relationship between her and Shikamaru.

Your writing style is really nice and flows very well. It can feel somewhat concrete at times, like it's more telling than showing, but this doesn't happen too often. Your writing is fine overall.

Anyways, I really enjoyed this story. Nice job! :)

Wow… what the hell is Shikamaru gonna do? Is he really going to kill Ryota, like what I think he'll do? :o

Honestly, I think you got both Shikamaru and Temari IC, especially Temari. Under the circumstances she's in, of course she'd be so vulnerable to the point that she'd cry. I'm glad Shikamaru was there for her in the end, though. :)

Wow... Temari and Ryota are engaged? That's surprising. I have a feeling that Shikamaru's gonna end up going to the festival with Ai just so he can see Temari.

I thought this chapter was as great as ever, so don't worry about your writing at all. :) Ah, it's so in character of Tsunade to do something like that, sending Shikamaru of all people to Suna, where he'll definitely meet Temari and Ryota again. I can't wait to see what happens. I know there's gonna be lots of drama, though.

I thought this chapter was great, honestly. I love Tenten and Temari's conversation (TEMATEN BROSHIP MEANS EVERYTHING TO ME xD) and Chouji and Shikamaru's conversation on Temari. It's got me thinking why Temari is with Ryota in the first place… I'm sure we'll find out soon.

I feel so bad for Temari. :( Wow, I really don't like Ryota.