| Reviews for Tears of a Demon |
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snowcloud8 chapter 2 . 6/14/2011 I KNEW IT! I SO FREAKING KNEW IT! XD HA! |
BraveLittleTrickster chapter 5 . 8/24/2009 wow, I'm once again reading these stories, and boy do they bring back memories! This is a good trilogy! I'm not a big fan of Naruto stories other than Hinata, but this one is very good! Once again thanks for writing it, and talk to you all soon! Deidara |
BraveLittleTrickster chapter 11 . 2/26/2009 really good story, Daikou! thanks for writing yet another, i can't wait fo you to finish the third! ~Deidara |
Muse Scroll chapter 11 . 6/30/2008 Finally, Kyuubi says something. He's too quiet, to be honest. |
SNOW ELK chapter 10 . 4/5/2008 Hello leader dimunda i really love this story BELIVE IT ! . Well please forgive me my lord for disrespecting you it was wrong to scream at snow goose and talk to you . Well i hope you like our idea for the name SOUL OF A DEMON please type anothor story about Daikou sence these kids were just now born . Well goodbye ohh one more thing you know how Snow Lioness reviewed twice well she didnt the one that is on top of the other is Snow Jackel he is so stubborn not to check every thing on his review well im sorry Snow Goose cant review this time because of two things 1 he broke his leg and 2 he has a head heack because me and Snow Dragon...okay okay just me i hit Snow Goose on the head . How Snow Goose broke his leg because when Snow Dragon tried to stop me and Snow Jackel from killing him Snow Dragon triped over a chair in the kichen and when Snow Goose ran in there to check on her he tripped over her and his knee hit the door and when he turned on his back he twisted the bone and SSNAAP! he broke his foot but it was not that bad he should be okay in the next couple of weeks well goodbye and sorry forgive me . |
SNOW LIONESS chapter 10 . 4/5/2008 Hey leader dimunda i really love this chapter it is all the nice stuff i can think of . Well i really hope you like our idea about the name it would mean alote if you used it I mean you dont have to i was just asking in the kindest way i can also i hope you use kyouki's new promblem ohh yeah can kyouki's white dragon tails always stick out she just has to hide them . Well goodbye and remeber no matter what you will always be our family and anywhere you go promise me you will never forget us because if you did Snow Dragon and Snow Lioness will throw a temper you know how girls like them can be hahaha OHH CRAPP IM SO SORRY NOW ITS TIME TO GO BECAUSE YOU SEE TODAY IS THE TIME OF THE MONTH FOR SNOW LIONESS AND SHE IS THROWING A TEMPER TANTREM BYE! . |
SNOW LIONESS chapter 10 . 4/5/2008 Hi my greatest best friend also my trust worthy leader Dimunda well i really hope you make a sequal because im already looking forward to it . Well i hope you call SOUL OF A DEMON that would be really cool . There is going to be one tiny problem with Kyouki we decided that as kyouki grew the more less human she became like for example when she hits thirteen she has sixteen tails and heres the problem when she is in human it is diffacult for her to stay in human form so when she is training she has to run to the bathroom or somewhere private and her dragon form is starting to become harting to control . So goodbye and tell us if you like the name and tell me if you like the problem about kyouki its just a aging thing you know well toodles . |
SNOW DRAGON chapter 10 . 4/5/2008 Hi Leader Dimunda how is it going good well i see your fever has finaly cleadered up . YEAH YEAH YEAH PLEASE DO A SEQUEL AND LET IT BE ABOUT NARUTO'S KIDS HM I WONDER WHAT SHINO'S KIDS WOULD LOOK LIKE! well if you do give shino some kids can the first one be a daughter who looks like Kusina except she also is a giant tiger goddess and she was a pure white/silver color and she had eagle wings and her name could be Kusino . Preety cool huh well bye ohh wait i got the perfect name for the new story how about #SOUL OF A DEMON# sence this story is called Tears of a Demon i think the next one can be called Soul of a Demon yeah i think thats perfect so on the next and final chapter tell us if you want to use it okay bye dimunda . |
DRAGON'S PEARL FANGS chapter 9 . 4/5/2008 Hi Dimunda I really love this chapter i really do and i hope i get to read and review the next chapter today that sounds like fun BELIVE IT!. Well i really love how the female baby is turning out also Snow Dragon told me to tell you a little bite more about Kyouki she is very talented like we said her emotions are effected by nature so when she is sad it will rain for no reason and the plants will die in a madder of seconds and when she is angry the plants will grow deadly thorns or the sky will be as black as night and there will very powerful lightning and thunder and finaly if she is happy like on a rainy day that is supposed to last for a week if she is happy she can make the sun shine without a cloud in the sky and even the flowers that were dead over a hundred years would bloom so brightly its like they only bloomed yesterday . And its like when kyouki is very happy there is no such thing as death . Well i i hope you liked that and now the personailty she is really funny she is nice she does not like people messing with her family even kyuubi she and her brother hardly fight maybe sometimes but not all the time and first kyouki always keeps her word she never gives up even when she is seconds away from dying . Well in kyouki's human form can she look exactlly like koyami except she has white hair because she developed her white hair and white scales from Daikou her tails have a very sharp sword shaped point at each end . I also got a good name for the son can his name be Nareo and well he is normal well he does have Kyuubi's eyes but thats it nothing else strange looking ohh and he looks exactly like naruto and he has the same features as his father and he is always keeping his word . One last thibg when these two get older can Kyouki always where her hair like neji and she can always wear a short sleeved T-shirt with a dragon wrapping its wings aroun the leaf syomble on the back of theshirt she also has white blue jean shorts with white sandels and Nareo can always wear a red jump-suit like naruto did when he was younger . Well i hope you like our new ideas also Kyouki has glowing blue orbs for eyes . Toodles . |
SNOW JACKEL chapter 9 . 4/4/2008 Hey Leader Dimunda i really loved this chapter i really do . Oh man hard to belive a quite guy like me lives in a house with screaming younger brothers and two crazy sychoe path sisters they are nuts and especially when one of them has a temper and your the leader do some thing are parents are hardly ever home so Snow Dragon waches us and you the only one (besides our parents) that Snow Dragon and Snow Lioness will listen too . Well any ways i better get off the couch and hold Snow Elk down while Snow Lioness holds Snow Goose down before they kill each other bye . |
SNOW ELK chapter 9 . 4/4/2008 Hey Leader Dimunda how is it...SHUT UP SNOW GOOSE . Hehehe kids these days you dont know what to do with them hehehe HEY DONT MAKE ME LOCK YOU UP IN THE CELLER AGAIN BOYY I MEAN BUSINESS . Well great chapter and i cant wait to review to next one update soon alright well i better go...HEEYY PUT THAT DOWN MAN I AM GOING TO DUNK YOU IN THE POOLL AND THEN TAPE YOU TO THE WALL AGH! . |
SNOW GOOSE chapter 9 . 4/4/2008 Hi Leader Dimunda (i baow to you in respect THEN HUG YOU then Snow Jackel is chasing me with a cruel bar and hitting me with it) well i here my crazy sisters are going to fight with you in the war well good luck and the boys and i will be here at home (were its safe) waiting for are loved ones . My loved one is my sister Snow Lioness and Snow Elk's loved one is Snow Dragon and Snow Jackel's loved one is you hehehehe i feel noddy you and Snow Jackel do make a lovly couple you know tha...UHHO im so sorry to cut this conversation short but Snow Elk is getting really mad and he is digging through Snow Dragon's private stuff oh crap hes GOT A BAT I GOT TO GO BYE LOVE BIRDS HAHA...OW SNOW ELK THAT HURT bye . |
SNOW LIONESS chapter 9 . 4/4/2008 Hi Mighty Great Leader Dimunda i really like this story and i hope you get better soon . Well well well i see that Rikku reviewer is still getting on our nerves and what is with him saying #HEY HEY HEY i thought i told you not to update until you are better# wu have i had it now AND COME ON ITS JUST A FEVER A FEVER CAN GET BETTER THAT REVIEWER IS ACKTING LIKE ITS GOING TO KILL YOU WELL ITS NOT IM GETTING REALLY MAD AT HIMM ACKTING LIKE THE BOSS IF HE SAYS ONE MORE BOSSY COMMEND I SWARE HE IS GOING TO GET IT I SWARE ON MY LIFE . Well toodles and update soon alright and also i got you a gift two actually i give you a GIANNTT lion huge and last some solider advice if you want to get the biggest postion im going to be a pilote so is Snow Dragon we are going to be your back up from the air well i give you a new Riffle yeah use it wisely and dont kill people with it like Snow Goose does with 22 sniper guns huh well any ways bye bye . |
SNOW DRAGON chapter 9 . 4/4/2008 Hi Leader Dimunda i really like this chapter it was really cool BELIVE IT! . And i cant wait to surve in the army with you and Snow Lioness ohh yeah umm promise you wont get mad but sometimes i okay all the time i look at the other reviewers just to make sure they are not saying the wrong thing to our great leader that one Uchia reviewer is really getting on my nerves Snow Lioness would not leave me alone last night screaming about what he said so Leader Dimunda can you please warn that reviewer if you want to that you have friends (almost family) is getting a bite upset for how he is talking to you . Well i got a quick idea on the next chapter can Kabuto get really impationet and he decided to kill Koyami and make naruto suffer and what he didnt know was the young ones were already out and the daughter is really big you see Kyouki is a bite diffrent when she is born give her a hour or so and she is already almost the size of a meadium sized Kazul and man does Kabuto get a butt woupen from a little dragon . And i cant belive the Kyuubi is so careless and there his own children well goodbye sister . |
naruto fan 4 ever chapter 9 . 4/4/2008 thats no fair! i want more! danget! let there be a new chapter...Now! danget! Great story. you kept me at the edge of my set the hole time! awesome! |