Where is rose?

It started out good but lost me towards the middle and end. It just didnt flow well for me. That being said. It was a good read and enjoyed most of it.

Much love
Ashlie Christine

Love it. Thank you.

A very sweet story !

Okay so soorry for my comment earlier, but still the plot is rather boring, but I like the way you write. Still a very good story!

Boring boring. I don't even know why I'm reading it...

I love readng the story and wish it did not finish

Omg I am fed up off crying while reading the last 2 chapters, surely Edward will come to her?

I can't even. This story had me bawling. It was simply amazing. Holy crap I'm still teary. (:

This is amazing! I never review stories but felt I had to for this. You did what most people who write bella and edward fanfics fail to do. You kept the the true essence of their characters and only changed what needed to be done for the purpose of the story and even the slight changes were done in the most flattering and beautiful way. That last chapter brought me, the most emotionless person I know to tears. None of your writing seems forced or awkward. A lot of authors on this site try to include too many original characters and can't keep even a fraction of many of their personalities but you were not afraid to add characters and you developed them so well. I want to thank you for your beautiful story and I really hope this encourages you to never stop writing because I really believe you have an unmistakable talent :)

Really a nice and romantic story :)

Great story. I wish there was a sequel to it

Bella's attitude came out of nowhere!

Sooooo...are Edward and Bella together?

They left? *sob sob* I was thinking about listening to No Air as I read this, but I know the lyrics off by heart, so I sung it to myself in my head. Didn't give off as much effect as I hoped :D