oo I really love this story!

i love this story. i think it was brilliant how you wrote about Orian finally getting in touch with the others then went to the Inners talking about finally hearing from Mamoru. And the flashes Usagi got when looking at Orian of Mamoru just made it seem more like Orian was Mamoru. I loved Usagi doing the parent thing when leaving the Unicorn baby with the Outers. this was a very enjoyable story and I didn't want to stop reading and go to bed (in fact I stayed up till 5 am reading). thank you for this wonderful story and now i'm going to read part 2.

I really like this story I bookmarked it I hope to read all of it please continue it! please xD

I must say this was very good and I enjoyed the whole thing. I did not expect you to pair Usagi up with Seyia. I have rarley ever seen that couple before. I must say I thought you would have picked Harry. None, the less this is a very good fic. I look forward to reading the next part. :)

will there be a sequel?

This is amazing. GOnna read the sequel/part 2 now...

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow, I like this story, it's good. I really like the part with the baby unicorn, I found that one fun.

Hi!, short chapter, but good, please continue, I'd love to read more, bye!.

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ok it a great story

Wow that was amazing. I loved how strong you made Usagi, she could've been her mother or the queen she is to become. It was so amazing I felt as though I wanted to go in and join in the group myself. I don't know how else to praise this. All I can say is great work, keep on writing V

Woah! I was just wondering where your fanfiction was and I stumble upon it with the rating up..I was like..oh my gosh! I mean..I didn't get to review Ch.19-20! I was like shocked to find this fanfic with the rating up. I think the only reason that your reviews went down a bit was since not alot of the readers know about it going up.

very wicked chapter

keep up the good work