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   yaoilover729 chapter 15 . 12/23/2010 NOOOOO! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE!*I tackle the boys but land on Axel*...okay...um...*falls* |
| yaoilover729 chapter 9 . 12/22/2010 dude,it POCKY,not sad...AN AWESOME ASIAN SNACK THAT YOU PLAY D POCKY GAME WITH SHOULD NOT BE DEPRIVED OF AWESOMENESS! but,Sora has a pretty good taste of snacks if he's like dat about pocky even to Ri. lol,im a pocky addict...I finished 2 boxes of pocky playing d pocky game with a pretty sexy Japanese(im Japanese and i live in Japan but i speak English most of d time cuz im an otaku/fujioshi and i spend all of my free time on d PC...)Axel look-alike and we had 5 min. left of lunch period and we finished it all! it was a tie cuz my bro took like 2 pocky. we had chocolate n strawbrry. LOVED IT! |
| yaoilover729 chapter 8 . 12/22/2010 Cloud...I WILL SQUISH UR PLUSHIE SO HARD I MIGHT KILL YOU! *chu* |
| yaoilover729 chapter 7 . 12/22/2010 Me:I'll need alot of Sephiroth's voodoo dolls so I can CHOP IT ALL UP AND THROW IT IN THE PIT OF TARTARUS! HE SHALL DIE AND FACE MY WRATH! Cloud and Riku:*hugging each other cuz they're scared and their mouths are hanging open* Me:What? |
| yaoilover729 chapter 6 . 12/22/2010 Me:lol,this chapter was the funniest. Got it memorized? Axel:WTF? WHAT'S WITH EVERYBODY STEALING MY LINE? Me:*kisses him*Oh shut up. You're lucky I like you or you'd be chained up stripped naked right now. Axel:You have a perverted mind. Me:Uh,thnx? |
| yaoilover729 chapter 5 . 12/22/2010 your story so far is sooo good! i tell ya,i usually like more straight forward,hardcore yaoi stories,but this is good!and also,i like imagining Axel with his shirt off for some reason...im like,in love with him...so sexy...mmm... |
| Raixal the Wrath chapter 12 . 11/12/2008 Freaken awesome story you got here. Many unexcepting things flowing around! Like everyone listed was supposedly dead. XD I hope you update this story. |
| The Crystal Pen chapter 12 . 10/19/2008 TEWG: AWW. POOR REPLIA, I HAVE ALWAYS LOVED YOU! WHY MST YOU DIE! DX 801: It's gonna be over? Aww... TEWG & 801 |
| The Crystal Pen chapter 11 . 10/7/2008 TEWG: WE FINALLY GOT AROUND TO READING THIS! :D LOVE IT! 801: Never will I stop being maimed! XD I like the way you made the Organizations members die the same way they use their powers. (So Cloud doesn't have a pinky in Final Fantasy VII?) TEWG & 801 |
| puppyfic chapter 7 . 9/26/2008 cool |
| darke chapter 11 . 8/6/2008 this is such a good fanfic can't wait for more . |
| OrangeWocket chapter 10 . 6/12/2008 well i like the story line alot.. but it could use alot more details.. you seem to be like rushing a little mybe.. i am not feeling really connected with the characters and i am a little confused... i think if you were to go through and add more detials into the story.. like explain the surroundings or the characters background or face expressions.. but he plot line is good.. just need to work on writing.. i think.. although my writing skills arnt very good but its easiser to give advice then to take it!lol well good luck ! |
| The Crystal Pen chapter 10 . 6/10/2008 TEWG: :3 I LOVE THIS CHAP! MORE LEONCLOUD NEXT CHAPTER? PLEASE? 801: Looking forward for the next chapter Nierx! TEWG & 801 |
| The Crystal Pen chapter 9 . 6/5/2008 TEWG: WE KNOW YOU SAID TO PM YOU BUT... WHAT? WHAT DOES "THOSE NAMES MEAN NOTHING FOR YOU ARE NOTHING" MEAN? 801: Yay for chappy! :p TEWG & 801 |
| The Crystal Pen chapter 8 . 5/18/2008 801: No! Stupid Roxas! Axel better do something about it! TEWG: WHO DO I HATE? ROXAS FOR TRYING TO KILL SORA OR SEPHIROTH FOR KILLING CLOUD'S LOVED ONES? OH WELL, BOTH. TEWG & 801 |
