hello...i really loved your story. but i was actually wishing to see the bonds between edward and ethan and also bet'n emma and and bella. and that was an abrupt ending.

I just finished reading your story and it rocks! Emma doesn't seem very similar to Bella but that's just my opinion. Hmm, I can't wait for the sequel(s?)

~Faithy~

good storie

love the stoie so far

can i have the link?

holy crap! i loved the whole chapter.. hell i love this story... lol..

i have been to puerto vallarta and i loved it... its so beautiful... i will always love it because it was the first and last time i ever saw my grandpa on a horse.. they have amazing horse rides... they take you up to a water fall thats high up on a mountain... is really something to see...

your right super short but i cant wait to see whats gonna happen.. eek!

uh,, kinda doing the whole starwars thing with the twins.. but i really like this story.. even though i haven hid any thing under my mattress since i was like 12 lol..

Interesting.. i am so drawn in..

the whole part where Emmett said "amen" to edward and bella's private little speech was hilarious. They were so intence and then all of a suddend he jumps in and craks a joke- typical Emmett :) great job, keep it up :)

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ur story is awesome!

Omgur story was fantastic! Plz post the name of the sequel!

Awesome!

Oh, I Love it! I love it! I love it! Can't wait to read Eathan's Story!