OMFG
"HEY NATSUME STOP IT! I WAS HERE FIRST! I was with her first... I brought her here first..."ejaculated the blond boy trying to fight his best friend, "GET AWAY FROM HER PLEASE!"

EJACULATED EJACULATED EJACULATED EJACULATED EJACULATED Ejaculated EJaculated wtf man

What the fuck? Mikan you stupid bitch you should have said no! And Natsume what the hell? Ruka why didn't you stop them? This is so fucked up it doesn't even make sense why ruka would leave her and she would jump

I really liked this one-shoot, it's very good! I don't know why, but when I first watched the anime I was sure Natsume was this kind of guy, so I like Ruka better for Mikan! And, I'm glad you also have a Kamichama Karin story, I've been looking for a good story for almost a week and I haven't found any, so I'll try yours!

-Michelle Potter-Black

p.s. I love your Oneshoot!

its nice and i feel sad for mikan falling from a cliff a thousand times poor girl

Ummm...I kind of don't understand about it is there a connection of falling of the cliff?

Please tell me I have been obssesed about it since 2 days T_T

OMG you wrote the pankacke fiasco that was like an epic oneshot I TOO LOVE PANKCAKES AND WOULD DO ANYTHING TO GET THE LAST ONE you are one funny auther

keep writing stories about ruka and mikan ill try to write some to :D

the story was... well... nice but i really didn't saw any meaning of it i'm really very sorry for being harsh but this story , in the meanings point of view, sucked. but through emotional eyes you can see through the meaning to ruka's power or whatever of love.

what the? o.o

Meanie Natsume. I hate him in this story. Graet!

that is so cute

That girl is an idiot! That boy is a female dog! Ruka's so kind... -w-

How sweet! This was wonderful and can be figuratively compared in real life relationship situation. I loved it.

i didn't get the point... but i like the fact that Ruka's always there for her... ahehe..

it's actually kind of, unrealistic? [his aint a flame. dont worry.]

why? i think mikan would be mad or something if she keeps falling off a cliff. i mean, 3 times?

poor mikan, always falling.

true, weird in a good way.

it's weird, in a good way. Haha. Mikan keeps on falling off the cliff, shouldn't she be dead by now? O_o haha.

Is this fic supposed to be symbolic? , just asking. haha. write more please.