Reviews for A Long Road Home
ForeverChasingDreams chapter 8 . 10/27/2009
This is very sweet - I love Harry and Ginny fics. Please carry on writing - its really good.
restinpace chapter 6 . 6/15/2009
I liked that chapter, it's nice to know the origins of "Luna", (never understood that) but now Harry is going to have a problem with alliteration that sounds really cheesy. That was my main problem with Lily Luna, the cheesy alliteration.
lalababee chapter 8 . 1/4/2009
Aw

Update soon!

Love it!
charah.tastic chapter 5 . 12/9/2008
K i'm gonna put you out of your misery here, and Review. you and i both are doomed to 89 reviews xD. Anyways, I acually love the fact that it's not in any order. it's like a puzzle, really, and it makes me want to read it all the way to the end. goot job!

Pickles,

;D
SiRiUsLyInLuV71 chapter 5 . 10/24/2008
Ginny dated two boys and married the third... and she is considered a slut? WHY?
SiRiUsLyInLuV71 chapter 3 . 10/24/2008
Ginny is actually a WAY better Quitditch player than Katie, because in Ginny's 5th year tryouts (HBP), she scored '17 goals to boot', while Katie scored much less. Harry even said that 'Ginny out flew the rest of the competition,'

So yeah...

But great job though.
nightwing27 chapter 8 . 10/5/2008
man I really hate Rita skeeter she always like talking trash about harry nice chapter
len chapter 8 . 10/4/2008
Yay good job!
mustardgirl1128 chapter 8 . 10/3/2008
ust-just

"you make a good actor, you know."-"You make..."

never ending-never-ending (I think...)

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Sorry. That was me being picky and forgetting that you're in Japan for the best few weeks? of your life. xD (We miss you here at fanfiction!)

Amazing job, despite the mistakes I pointed out. I LOVED the description of their perfect, private first wedding, and the chaos of the second. "They run along the beach, their bare feet dancing as they twirl around the imprints left by the waves." What a beautiful line! Fantastic job, I loved this!

Hmm, title, title, title..."Lawfully Wedded Wife"? Oh god, I fail at titles. Good luck with finding one, and have fun in Japan!
LuLaRoo7 chapter 8 . 10/3/2008
Loved it!

Update soon.
Wotcher-Tonks chapter 7 . 9/25/2008
sad. I want more! :D
Wotcher-Tonks chapter 6 . 9/25/2008
I really like the letter format, and the little backstory as to why Lily got the middle name Luna.
Wotcher-Tonks chapter 5 . 9/25/2008
This isn’t the Harry she knows, slightly arrogant but very cautious, as though one wrong move, one wrong touch might break her porcelain skin –

I love that. I think that Harry would definitely be like that because Ginny is one of the few good things he's ever had, and he doesn't want to lose her. It's sweet.
Wotcher-Tonks chapter 4 . 9/25/2008
With deft speed, Ginny tosses Luna a note; it narrowly misses the back of Snape’s head as he scowls at Michael Corner’s potion, before Luna snatches it out of midair and tucks it under her textbook, her confused aura making her feat all the more impressive.

Love. That. Quote. I can totally see Luna doing that. And I like how you have the bit where Snape is scowling at Michael's potion- because it adds nice detail to the scene. Excellent job.
Wotcher-Tonks chapter 3 . 9/25/2008
nice chappie. I really like Ginny throwing plates and mugs. It's so...Ginny. :D
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