Good story, the ending was kind of anticlimatic though.

I had a question. to stay as a student at the school he has to be taken in the class and you chose runes. The problem with that is he already took his newt for runes so he's not really eligible to take the class anymore, he would have to be taking some other class like muggle studies or arithmency or something like that because he already finished runes.

Just wanted to point out another thing in this chapter you have Harry being able to control the castle boards at age 16 whereas earlier in your story I'm not sure what chapter but it's been a while I'm pretty sure you said something about him not being able to manipulate them until at least 17 though I could be wrong and if I am wrong then it was 21.

this probably won't help because you're already finished with the story but you're using the words occlusion and occlusionist incorrectly or rather they aren't the words you should be using. In the Harry Potter fandom occlumency is the art of protecting your mind whereas what Harry /Remy was doing is called legilamancy (mind you I'm not sure this correct spelling of either of those but they should be pretty close). So he's not doing anything like occlusion or occlusionist it would be the second word equivalent.

I'm really enjoying this story! I did have two points on this chapter though. it was brief but Harry did already say he loved Draco in one of the previous chapters when they were already dating. Also how did Draco blaze and their parents get to Potter Manor or Castle or whatever it is when in an earlier chapter you stated that Harry's or Remus's grandparents had taken everyone off the ward list except for a few people including Harry and his adoptive parents and Sirius so how are they able to come in and how will Chloe be able to come in if she does come to the thing as they can't be added to the list until Harry turns 17?

Worst story ever.

Loved most of it. But u sud of put up warning about the rapes and kidnapping in the summary and on the actual chapters so those that don't want to read the sort of thing or have the right to know and not read that part or not read this story at all

I'm so disappointed the last 2 chapters of this story are identical why? Why didn't you put up an epilogue instead of copying the previous chapter?

You seem to have confused Oclumency with Legilimency, Oclumency is the art of protecting ones mind and Legilimency is the art of for lack of a better term reading someone else's mind

I'll keep reading as I've been enjoying this story however a trigger warning due to the rape scene in this chapter should be put up.

Nah I'm done with this story. Bad enough he forgave his sister after she tried to kill him multiple times I skipped to the last chapter and he's calling James uncle ,?. Nope I'm done

please tell me that isn't his permanent name... cause it's kinda bad...

Hello! I just want to say that I'm absolutely loving this Harry Potter fanfiction it's really amazing and one of the best I've ever read so thank you for writing it

Hopefully they will catch the sick bastard!

As long as Mr. Jackal (Jackal! ominous!)