| Reviews for Two worlds, One story |
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   Kyla-saurs-rex chapter 5 . 11/9/2015 Ooooooo please update soon! |
| Hayate chapter 2 . 4/21/2012 The only thing I found strange was that Kanda's hands were smooth. He uses his sword so much they should be rough and calist. |
| Shinome Akira chapter 5 . 2/5/2012 Please write more! ! |
| Kuroi Yuki 13 chapter 5 . 12/27/2010 I really like the story, but why are the quotation marks arrows? |
| WaveMoonstone chapter 5 . 8/31/2010 EGAD this story is awesome, please update soon! :] |
| Hesunohana chapter 5 . 10/29/2009 a very good beginning ! the found the Innocence, what will happen ? |
| AmarantineOct.3'11 chapter 5 . 8/18/2009 NU! i really NEED to know what happens! oh no! will they think allens dangerous since his arms obviously going to turn into a CLAW for gods sake! i mean i would be freaked out! oh by the way what innocence does he have? his claw or crowned clown? |
| Azrak chapter 5 . 6/10/2009 More I must have MORE! |
| Memory chapter 4 . 6/1/2009 Woah! Great story! Please update! |
| chaos key chapter 5 . 5/25/2009 WAow! That's something! I love your story! I hope the next chapter will be up soon! Thanks for the good story! |
| A chapter 5 . 5/23/2009 I don't know if I can agree with your characterization of Allen. He is portrayed as a naive, clueless boy who isn't able to survive on his own. Which is definitely not the case. Allen is able to get along and talk with various kinds of people and it isn't often that he is tongue-tied. Allen can also fight. I think your fanfiction has a lot of potential but your Allen kind of ruins it for me. |
| Arkticfox chapter 5 . 5/22/2009 keep going - |
| olivia-yuymaxwell chapter 5 . 5/22/2009 though lack of yullen but this chapter is still interesting :D and i'm hoping more for the upcoming ones too :D Viva yullen _ |
| blahrius chapter 5 . 5/21/2009 Gah, yay for a long chapter! Please update soon! |
| SilentKiller1 chapter 5 . 5/20/2009 oh boy i would have ran after them |
