a nice little comfort stoey-it's really sweet-i wish you would go on with it

tisk tisk naughty soubi taking rit-chans clothes

I squinted, but couldn't find any SeimeixRitsuka. XD

Really nice fic. .

this is a great story, so what happens in the morning?

it was CUTE, and I love Ritsuka's jumbled feelings for Soubi...LOL

THANKS:"D

i seem to love everything that envolves soubi and ritsuka. the thing is i had the same feeling reading this like i had when i first saw the anime. i loved the fact that you didn't talk about a sex scene or something like that, people seem to see only the gay thing in this kind of anime or manga. but it's just much more than that and you expressed it really well. i fully enjoyed reading it :D

Aw! That was so sweet, and so in character, and so perfectly described! Wonderful, wonderful!

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That was very amazing O:

-sir real

I really enjoyed it! Cute setting, made me smiled. Even had a bit of a funny ending. I think you focus (atleast in this story) on actions quite a bit. You could (if you wanted) try and incorporate more thinking, more reasoning, maybe emotion (but the emotion level was good already too). Again, this is just somthing you could try if you wanted to, your story was really good even without it.

So cute! Sad, but cute all the same! :)

Aww... That's cute. I really liked it. So sweet.

Good job with this!

Poor Ritsuka, poor Soubi.

Write more and I'll review more!

~ Oni

Beautimous. Why can't I write stories like this?...

aw I really liked it. Great job

That story was so cuttend I luved it! You did a good job bringing out the characters' personalities and I liked how you brought Seimei back for a flashback. it helped bring out Soubi's love for Ritsuka!