update please

then she died

Okay so I always wait to the end of a series (or up to what has been written at least) to comment and I have to say, I really love this series! At first I wasn't sure because I'm personally not a huge fan of Deidara (though my best friend and RP buddy is lol) but this story made me not care. It's a lot of fun! I love that you portray the characters in a more laid back, light manner while still keeping them in character.

This story is funny and has plot turns and twists. It was a creative idea. Most Akatsuki High stories are the same and poorly written for that matter, so I applaud you for being so original! I don't have much of my work in here, I'm mainly on Deviant Art. Do you know what that is and of so, do you have an account? If you like writing, you'll love that site. I highly recommend it, it'll get your work out there as well.

Anyway, I know how hard writers block can be, but just keep going. Eventually the brain decides it wants to start working again. XD

This is a really great story, one of my favourites and i couldn't stop reading it.

So hi, Wateranddarkness666, I will call you WD. I know it's rude. I'm sorry. Anyway, I guess you know what I'm trying to say here. Yes, about your story. I know I'm just a lowly reader, but please don't mind me. I'm just giving you some advice? If you don't think you'll like it, I warned you to leave immediately. 'Cause there probably words that you won't like.
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I guess you're reading. I found out that's stupid. So, you kinda had left your story at a cliffhanger. Of course, the readers will be curious as to what will happen to the Akatsuki. I'm also curious, obviously. I know that you're busy because of college? It has been five years since your last update. We've been waiting for 5 years for your new chapter. And you haven't post any. To be honest, I'm quite disappointed in you. I've keep re-read your story over and over again. My patience is wearing thin. Some will say that why should they keep writing when there's no money to earn? But hey, if you already know about this, why keep on writing? Of course I'll still be waiting for your new chapter.

I really hope that you'll post a new chapter. Because if you're want to make your readers happy, that's the only thing you could do. I know you said that you Won't give up on this story. But who knows? Maybe you've already abandoned this story. Just saying. Don't be mad. 'Cause I'm really sorry if you do. That's all I gonna say, I guess.. By the way, your story is really good. And I'm really sorry for the words you hate?

ITS A REALLY AWESOME STORY! are you going to do any more chapters?

Please update I need to know what is happening! TT

Please update!

Please make more

*melts* the ending is so KAWAIII!

I hate cliff hangers. Continue!

Ill give you a week tops to update this story before I cut your tongue off and feed it to pigs. 3

Amazing fanfic and a great storyline
Please update soon (:

PLEASE UPDATE, I really want to know what happens next

I basically read the whole thing before reviewing hehehe.. It was way good like way good.. I like the deidara x kari pairing it's good likr super good.. Just loved it... Do continue writing if it's not finished yettt...