This is such a beautiful story. Dickon and Mary feel REAL here. Your descriptions of nature are powerful-they evoke the magic of the actual book.

This is the best Mary and Dickon story ever!

Susan is Santan's favorite whore

Just wanted to say thank you for such a beautiful story. You are a fabulous writer and I am so thankful to have my favourite couple finally happy together. x x x

I loved this. One of the most beautifully written stories I have ever read on this sight. You have a wonderful gift for seeing your characters properly. I feel like this could absolutely been written as a genuine continuation of the book.

Upon finishing Beyond the Secret Garden, I was really, really disappointed that you tore Dickon and Mary out of character. Neither of them would ever, ever think of doing all that before marriage.

I am disappointed, it was going rather well until all that...

-UD

Upon reading Chap. 13:

Why doesn't Dickon just post a second letter, without Susie knowing, and explain everything to Mary?

Proofreading Chap. 8, I think you might want to change the rating to a T.

This is one of the best fanfictions that I have ever read. It was extremely well-written and the way you described the moor was very calming. Very good job.

One of the best fan fictions I have ever read. Thank you :)

Loving this!

Awwww they are cute!

Awwww...

oooh there is sparks between them...

liking it...