Reviews for Naruto, Demon Master
buna2001 chapter 8 . 3/4/2018
who the fuck is matt
Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
it short
serena chapter 6 . 3/9/2015
ha!ha! trop marrant
Balfie chapter 14 . 9/6/2013
Please update soon!:) Thanks. If you are not going to please put it up for adoption:)
Michael Bourne chapter 5 . 4/15/2013
breaking news anbu you're dead
Guest chapter 8 . 2/11/2013
rinnegan for bloodline and fight sasuke
kyosuke-date-the soultaker chapter 3 . 8/2/2010
Ugh, dude! It's Yondaime! not Yondimane or whatever!
Anon chapter 2 . 5/13/2010
All overpowered OCs always ruin fanfics. thus yours sucks
RhiJ chapter 14 . 3/31/2010
I luv it

cud u plz put anko in plz I don't cRe if the poll finished just plz do it

sex bye
maliekal tharakan chapter 2 . 2/25/2010
good story, but it's not yondimane, it's Yondaime
someone you dont want to know chapter 5 . 1/18/2010
on 4th sentence of Chapter 5... it says Hidan... shouldnt it be Nate?
Keeper of the Infinite Library chapter 14 . 1/2/2010
The story and the plot is good but I think that you will have to cut down on the amount of rape going on... personally I would only put one instance of rape in a story and then only if it would help with the story... It is mostly because I cant stand for it, I will conceed that you are a good writer as it gets to me... but still I believe you have enough of those seens.(sorry about the typos but I can never remember when I've been awake for to long.)
KagomeGirl021 chapter 14 . 9/27/2009
wow this is getting good update again soon! i hope deidara joins konoha i kinda like his character. im also curious to see if itachi will be a good guy or not.

it's been over a year now so please update!
deadw8 chapter 10 . 8/2/2009
that baster he need to meet vald the impaler
Kuraitsuki Tukiko chapter 14 . 7/28/2009
Make yugito be the new wife please...XD
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