love it

I love a manipulative Nara, and authors who exploit his gift! Especially if it's for the benefit of Sasuke and Naruto. Very cute fic!

Aww, excellent story! D

Firstly, I love ShikaNeji so much that you had me since I read the summary.

Anyway, Sasuke being possessive and jealous and afraid of losing Naruto is one of my favorite depictions of him, mostly because I think Naruto really fucking deserves it. So, I'm definitely favoriting this and you did an amazing job writing it, I'm glad I got to read it.

ASAFGHKLDIJJFG ..
jealous sasuke is my favorite and i'll bet he'll be fun to teased if he's in that state! :D
i like the way you used the words Dangerous, it really is well fitted in their situation: they're friends with benefits, but it's too dangerous to take another step to make their relationship a little more intimate.

and oh ho .. i LIKE your scheming Shika there ! SasuNAru couple ? i LOVED it! with a little shikaxneji and a snoring kiba there ? super LOVED it ! tehee :)
kudos to you.

Funny, lovable, and with an absolutely brilliant ending! Shikamaru is my favorite character because of just such things like this (fanfiction and non ;P)

Loved it, loved it. LOVED IT. Oh lawd, Shikamaru and his schemes XD This was funny, touching, and angsty all in one, and brilliantly written. Great work!

Peace Out! _

Wow, I didnt know jealose Sasukes could make such an interesting read, but you acomplished it. Neji and Shika? Somehow, that works great. Great story!

Hahaha, ahh... Shika's lines at the end there made me laugh... Sneaky, Shika, sneaky!

Wow, that was brilliant... I really enjoyed how you started with Naruto and his insecurities and then Sasuke's and placed them against each other, showing the complementary-ness of their thoughts and feelings. Dangerous words... what a lovely phrasing, especially how they were using the other words as a screen against the important ones.

Beautifully done! And the Shika/Neji parts were awesome there at the end! Another awesome pairing! XD

Loved your story! Thought the subject kind of made sense. Having friend with benefits and pushing for more might screw things up_I could empathize with your characters. But they are Sasuke and Naruto-and as the author-you can make sure everything works out okay. Liked the added Neji/Shika with a touch of Kiba. It all fit real well together. I loved when Sasuke was going over a mental list of all of Naruto's insufferable qualities and then fell into a list of all his endearing qualities. This was funny: (What the hell was wrong with him? If Sasuke was in love with a moron, didn’t that make him a kind of moron also?)-I chuckled at that one. I hope there's a continuation_would love to see the boys affirm their relationship and feelings for each other. Thanks so much for taking the time to write and share this story with us. I've enjoyed a couple of your stories now-and plan on reading more. Again-Thanks!

“what’s up, retard?”

“Nothing much, asshole,”

That's a GREAT way to greet someone~! '

*runs to read the sequel* Woot!

wah! it's over... heh, loved the last line to pieces. very nice.

Aww that's it? Well, it's awesome and I love the fact that Sasuke's possessive, there's something sexy about that...Go SHIKAMARU!

that was really good you should countinue it!

This was exceptional!

*Waits for sequal* :)