Wow! I think I actually really like this chapter, despite how you say it sucks. It's really good!

Its great to hear from you again!

I checked my email and saw your update and nearly fell off my chair! its been what... 1-2years? lol. Your writting is still tip top shape I see

teeheeheeeee

Tomoyo is so cute! I know because you have this based around the SxS there then next chapter will have a bang, but you make me love Tomoyo even more2 ;) I can't wait for ur next move~~

Keep up the good work Amber

I can't wait to see the end of this story

so... Tomoyo IS falling for another man?

And WHY is people going on about Li being Lupin?

that confuses me so much more TT

PLZ update soon and relieve me of this confusion miss amber

I sawy your draft for the next chapter but after reading the actual chapter 13, I can't help but say you are my fucking favorite author in fanfiction!

Forget what anybody says otherwise, you are MY fav XD

I couldn't agree with Risa anymore!

This is a fab story and your style of writting is making me appreciate each of the original characters we so ignored before. I hav always fancied thrillers and mysteries, but you make me love them more!

Quite frankly, I think this fiction has me on my toes.

I can see that Tomoyo's bit is expanding but I know you have more in plan so I will just have to anticipate the break out that Sakura will have in this story. Im still mad at you for the late update but ...god! this story is addicting as hell. I can't skim anything at this rate because this is like some big puzzle and every piece is coming together one by one

God... This story is not helping me get over my addiction with mysteries. I was a huge fan of Agatha Christie stories growing up and I believe you're just as masterful at the art of writing mysteries as the master herself. Your story has me at the edge of my seat wondering just who Lupin is. At one point, I was pretty sure it was Syaoran and I still have him at the back of my mind as a front runner. However, Eriol right now is taking top spot. There are a multitude of reasons as to why he would want to rob his own exhibition. I've read enough mysteries to know that it's not just a vague possibility. Those two are the two front runners in my mind for Lupin at this point.

This, however, is all complicated with Haste in the picture. Of course it's possible that Lupin could be someone from Haste but with all that I've read so far, that'd just be a tad too simple. And I'm frankly hoping that it'll be someone we all suspected but ruled out for various reasons.

Lastly, only Tomoyo's actually met lupin and she could have easily made up her encounters with him. It's not the first time I've seen that done so it wouldn't surprise me either. No one has actually confirmed that Lupin is indeed male after all.

All this is very intriguing indeed and it's bringing out the inner detective in me. I can't wait to read more and I shall be waiting anxiously for your next update which I pray will be soon.

Risa

This is wrong, and I know it. I just wanted to know if you noticed this:

Lupin-Wolf

Wolf-little wolf

Little Wolf-Syaoran.

Interesting, no?

im starting to skim the parts where it's all about tomoyo. i get that she should have an equal part but it's all about the SS.

the plot is good but Tomoyo's part could've been good for sakura too. idk that's just me

I'M GETTING SICK OF TOMOYO'S STORY WITH LUPIN. i was hoping more of ss. i enjoy your story but reading tomoyo's part is making me want to stop...there's too much

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Oh, Sakura and her caffiene induced dreams. Sounds like things are picking up...

I love your story. Can you add another "hot scene" between Syaoran and Sakura? Just to make things more complicated.