I usually like Hotch but right now I could smack him,grr! And now who's going to comfort poor Reid the next time Floyd abuses him? This is a bit of a rushed review as I didn't realize what time it was and I'm off in a mo,but I feel a bit guilty enjoying all this angst but I can't wait for more in the sequel! :oD

NO! Hotch! This is so not fair! I mean, yes, Reid lied and Hotch was stoned. That's a pity. But come on! Reid had been in this hole for much longer than Aaron. They peeled him! And he was hurt too in the consequence of his lie. Again: Aaron should know the Flanders-effect. Of course, he knows! After all he enjoyed himself with Floyd on the beach while Reid was being tortured. I am really upset with Mr. Self-righteous-Hotchner right now. Because of him Reid is damaging himself again. Gr.

Don't get me wrong: I love how you write this. And I want more! Soon!

Goodness.. Aaron is such a tightass..! i do see where he's coming from, but still..!

I am seriously dying to see how the "perfect family" is going to fit into that neighborhood! Good to see that Floyd finally pulled his head out of his bum and taken responsibility - and came back to Spence!

I am really looking forward to the next story, I can't believe you just ended this one.. *growl*

Fab job, my sweet!

oh my poor baby!

how come floyd could just walk into the hospital, after what he did to that nurse?

i loved the pirate reference... i choose the pirate!

and i cant believe aaron! well i can, but surely he should see that reid is messed up and its because of floyd... and if my memory serves me right, aaron didnt ask for reid to give up that information... then again what with head injuries and that, he may not have been up to doing that

but of course you'll have to write a follow-up! so get to it!

love Floyd's 'delusion of a perfect family' that he has going on there

I also love the sudden displays of genuine affection from Floyd:

"Someone I will give my life for willingly and coming from me that is saying quite a lot"

"this most important thing in the world to me "

Hmm...so now Floyd is OK with Spence, kind of a quick turn around but at least he is now being decent with him. I'm glad.

The perfect family. Not.

I feel bad at the way Aaron is acting toward Spence but I don't blame him, Spence made his choice when he lied about where Floyd was and Aaron has every right to dismiss him even though he was also threatened by Floyd to stay away.

Great chapter...looking forward to the follow-up.

Brilliant Brilliant Brilliante! (yes I added an E... it's spanish... kind of)

Anywho that was completely grand!

Can't wait to see how everything pans out in your next ficcy!

This one was mucho awesome!

:D

MORE! Sequel! now! kehehehehe

Floyd! Tsk tsk love, leave Spence like that! You should be ashamed (not that you know how to be)!

"He stood in the corridor with his forehead against the cold wall and closed his eyes. His stomach was twisting in knots of confused feelings."

I do love this show of emotion though.

"He felt the hot water pouring over his bruised body as he stood naked in the shower in front of strangers he couldn’t see."

Why do you have to put ideas like that in my brain! :)

Oh no. Reid's doing it again. But I understand. Floyd, you coward! Of course, he is caring. Aaron pointed that out rather accurate. But Floyd can't admit it. And he doesn't want to be responsible for the damaged Reid. After all, it's his fault.

So wonderful and sad and many many other great things! Thanks for sharing! More please really soon!

Oh my...Floyd and Aaron. I will be going for a cold shower after writing this review. Very good chapter...I hate Floyd for abandoning Reid when he really needs him ... just when I think Floyd does care about Reid I remember who we are talking about...Floyd.

Rosa...well, it was inevitable, she is her father's daughter and if she ever does change it certainly won't be overnight.

I didnt want this chapter to end where it did...more more more, please.

Aw poor poor Spencer. *huggles him*

Wow, Floyd seemed... almost... human? Is that the right word? You know what I mean? Fabulous!

Everything was mucho fabulous!

One of my favorite chapters I think, and I'm not even sure why. Everything was so "normal" you know? But it was still terrific! Reid had a bit of psychological torture going for him I think, so maybe that's why.

Whatever the case,

Brilliant!

MORE MORE MORE MORE!

My heart is bleeding for poor Reid right now.. I can't believe it! Poor boy.. I just wanna hold him.

Floyd, stop smooching Hotch and go to Spencer, ya hear!

Stubborn annoying son of a...!

thank u sis for the lovely helpless aaron bit - i love how u have him trying to be in control, and failing - oh tummy turner!

rosa seems very familiar! and i dont mean her daddy!

more now please

needtostesis

oh dear, reid is at it again, not my poor reid

floyd is evil and the nurse was right

just dont send him after me

reid needs all the help he can get and he isnt helping

part of me thinks that floyd out of the pic would be nice, just reid and aaron, but i doubt that will happen

aw poor spence...

the only issue i have is that im confoozled

what is up with hotch and aaron

i thought they were in the hospital room, and then next theing they werent or at least they werent in my head

so im confoozled, as usual